Follow me and trust the night

[belle_lestrange]

Title: Carpe Noctem
Author: belle_lestrange aka Greenleaf
Beta: The most awesome jackieville All remaining mistakes are my own

Comments

[vienna80er]

Orlando's "depressed" is of the scale.
I hope they are able to help each other to make their life's more bearable.

Looking forward to more! :) *hugs*

[belle_lestrange]

thank you so much for commenting, sweetie! *big hug*

[doylebaby]

I don't know how I missed this.

Orlando's existence certainly isn't very uplifting. He doesn't have a purpose and holds a grudge against his father. Not much fun for him.
Sean is extremely naieve and I dislike Sarah with a passion and she's hardly been around.

Well done, dear, enough emotions going around! :)

[belle_lestrange]

aw i am so glad you liked it, i really thought i had scared a lot of people away *doh*

i am already in the planning stages of forming a sarah hate club *winks* sean has led a very sheltered life so far, like the complete opposite of orlando...but opposites are always drawn to each other, right *giggles*

+biiig hug*

[fictionbylouby]

I agree with other readers that Orlando is quite creepy but there's something intriguing about him, I love how you've introduced the relationship with his father and you can really sense his misery. I particularly liked the line about him being trapped in a 17 year old's body for ever. So many possible ways of taking this can't wait to see what happens next, great work Lovey.

[belle_lestrange]

aw the poor boy only needs loooooooooooooooooooove *g* no honestly i know that he is quite "different" than the "normal" orlandos in fanfics...

i am really glad you like it so far *hugs

[ahnjunae]

greetings belle;

love vamps...love orli...love this! thanks so much for the gift of your talent and this story...for some reason it reminds me of that old roman polanski film "the fearless vampire killers" dunno why...lol! that's a classic and so will this be!

HUGZ

[belle_lestrange]

wow thank you, i am so glad you like it :D *hugs* and this story is based on the musical "dance of the vampires" (or takes off after it) and dance of the vampires is based on the fearless vampire killers, although i have to admit i have never seen the film ;)

*hugs*

[giselleslash]

Ohhhh, I love bitter and drunk Orlando on the prowl after young, innocent, little Sean *g*

Very lovely, K! *squishes*

[belle_lestrange]

aw finally someone who doesn't think the poor boy is creepy *giggles* yeah yeah young, innocent, little sean...although don't let him hear about the little, he'll get all worked up about it and get complexes and orlando will never hear the end of it...

*cough* okay, i am back to normal now...whatever normal is...

so glad you like it! *hugs*