"that funny thing called forever"

[bello_romantico]

Title: ‘that funny thing called forever’
Author: bello_romantico, Kat, me. :)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: A spot of language here and there (and a miss-it-if-you-blink- kiss).
Summary: After a night of too many drinks, Paul faints and, when he comes to, he and John talk about life and death and forever.

Comments

[xsinclairx]

I loved this!!! It was cute and sweet...All wrapped up in magic. C: I adore your writing!

[slashy_456]

Oh, now this. This is the epitome of cuteness. I always love young J/P, and this was pulled off quite, quite well, I must say! The very last line was adorable. Not to say the others weren't, of course, but the last one was special. :)

Ugh. I mean, I really like the way John reacted to Paul fainting. It was sweet. As though the moment he saw something was wrong with Paul, he just jumped to the worst possible conclusion because he was so sick with worry.

I dunno, I haven't slept in well over 20 hours, and thus am not particularly coherent at this time. Sorry that my comment is probably half-assed... but know that I really loved this! (;