Comments | bellsie805: Ghost Ships

bellsie805

Ghost Ships

Jul 02, 2005 20:34

Title: Ghost Ships ( Read more... )

Comments 8

ibilic July 3 2005, 01:36:57 UTC

Really nice, I liked it very much!

"Life’s a race to die and we just use different fuel to get there.”

I really liked that line, it sounded like something House would say! :D Keep writing, this was great!

Thanks! bellsie805 July 3 2005, 01:43:28 UTC

Thanks! I came up with that line at the dinner table--my family sure loved that one ;).

veronicca05 July 3 2005, 04:34:08 UTC

Wow!! That was really great and heart-wrenching at the same time. You write beautifully!

Thankee! bellsie805 July 3 2005, 14:15:41 UTC

Thankee to all you wonderful commenters.

Regina--I love GWTW and Gatsby dearly. Plath I had heard of, but hadn't read any of her stuff before I had to use her for a poetry project in English, which is where I discovered her. Can't wait to see how you use her in a fic! :)

starhawk2005 July 3 2005, 14:24:41 UTC

Really good. Bittersweet....

Loved the 'different fuel' line...

Nice stuff!

ultimate_cin July 3 2005, 16:55:25 UTC

I really, really enjoyed this story - the flow was very nice and you captured both of their characters well. :)