Update: I'm very, very behind. VERY BEHIND. But that's okay; I am having some plotting issues, in the sense that I have not outlined at all and I am not quite sure where to go from chapter four. But I'll get it -- never fear!
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This is an excerpt from chapter two: )
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I love the snappiness of the dialogue here. I can't remember who C.C. is (is she the one who ends up rooming with the vampires?), but that doesn't really bother me. I just can't wait to read MORE.
:D Thank you for sharing your nano!
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C.C.'s a human whose soul was stolen and she was captured whilst attacking their "lair." :) I'm trying to take things that like ... can be a separate snapshot without being like "ugh this goes on and she just randomly cut it off," and that isn't an entire chapter lolololol. But I'll definitely be posting moreeee as the weeks go on; I'm also trying to do it in order (an excerpt from ch. 1, then ch.2, and next week'll be ch. 3 even though ch.3 is a hot mess...).
:D And thank you for reading!
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