title: Mirror Mirror
word count: 1085
author's note: For the mini contest at
brigits_flame, I've remixed
slang_jockey's entry "Shadow of Self." The original's
here, in case you haven't read it. This is, for all those people seeing this who are not familiar with BF, all conceptual property of
slang_jockey: plot and characters. I've simply restylized it and written it the way I would
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Giving a voice to the thing in the mirror was great, especially at the end. Honestly, I never really thought about what happened after the 'you' in the story hits the floor. It wasn't necessary. But here it was and wow! The last line just seals the whole piece.
This is great, congrats on your contest win!
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I noticed (perhaps erroneously) that your original story has since been published? Is that right? If so, that's pretty great. :) I'm impressed! I've never had anything published for real before. Congratulations!
I'm so glad you enjoyed this; I was worried that it wouldn't live up to your expectations (or my expectations, for that matter)!
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Ah, well I've quickly learned that you don't disappoint. You needn't ever worry about my expectations, though.
I've received nothing but rejections since, so I know how hard it is to try to get your writing published; have you ever tried though? I really think you should, if you haven't.
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I'm also working on a novel but that's coming along suuuuper slowly. It'd be nice to have some short story publications under my belt!
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