[fic] Jumper

May 06, 2012 13:06

Title: Jumper
Word count: 1314.
notes: Written for May, week 1 of brigits_flame. This is a weird story; I apologize in advance. I don't know why I wrote it. The prompt was "A bag of root vegetables," and I'll be the first to say that this was used very peripherally -- it did, however, inspire the whole thing (my first image, sadly, was of a suicide, not of soup ( Read more... )

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belluminabyssus May 7 2012, 02:06:35 UTC
♥ ♥

P.S. WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO WRITE MORE? I miss reading. :(

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belluminabyssus May 7 2012, 03:58:14 UTC
Okay, this is acceptable. Pictures are good, too! :D

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esme_amelia May 10 2012, 02:46:41 UTC
I loved this. It was so full of emotion, so raw, so powerful. I like how you portrayed Cassie as not breaking down emotionally and yet still scarred from her experience.

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belluminabyssus May 10 2012, 04:10:48 UTC
Aw, thanks -- I'm glad you enjoyed reading it! :)

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niliwen May 10 2012, 12:58:13 UTC
Brrr! I like the ending of this. It's chilling in the best sort of way.

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belluminabyssus May 10 2012, 21:59:34 UTC
Aw, thank you! :)

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keppiehed May 10 2012, 19:30:23 UTC
How are you always so perfect? I demand to know your secret! Did you make some kind of Faustian deal or something? I'm onto you, missy!

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belluminabyssus May 10 2012, 22:01:28 UTC
Lies, this is an unedited mess. XD I can assure you that no deals have been made, Faustian or otherwise. >.> But I'm so glad you liked it! It was a weird idea and i didn't even know where it's going and ... I actually probably still don't. lolol.

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belluminabyssus May 12 2012, 12:27:36 UTC
THE LAST SENTENCE HAS ONE, I PROMISE. I almost edited it out lolololololol. <3

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belluminabyssus May 12 2012, 12:46:09 UTC
It's actually funny that you started talking about that last night, because this fic is one that I was like "OKAY. LET'S FIND THE ANDS AND GET RID OF A LOT OF THEM. THIS IS RIDICULOUS." XDDDDD

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