Comments | beloved_enemies: The Term Isn't Incubus. It's Affection Person

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The Term Isn't Incubus. It's Affection Person

Apr 17, 2009 01:22

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ms_anthrophy April 17 2009, 08:04:40 UTC

Is this unbetaed?

I know my English isn't that good but there were quite a lot of spelling mistakes and the chapters were IMO not so well-arranged with spoken sentences and other text combined together so I suggest you should do some re-writing.

This is not meant to be flaming but constructive criticism, especially because I really, really love Lucius/Harry slavefics (ah, the good old times of fanfiction) and I would absolutely like to read this after good beta work because it has very good smut potential.

Re: ms_anthrophy April 17 2009, 10:56:12 UTC

Oh haha I actually totally agree with you. The formatting is my computers falt though, not mine. But I'm very glad you told me and I should have a fixed version by Sunday

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Re: sheena_bandy rainstyle April 17 2009, 11:29:38 UTC

Oh thank you. There's no better complement than death. I'm glad you liked it.

tragicallies May 28 2009, 00:28:11 UTC

a b c and d?

please?