I love the incorporation of Sherlock BBC into this world - characters I recognise! XP Lestrade as the commander makes sense - he's such an authority figure.
The story of Sherlock losing his wings is horrific, more so becuase there's no purpose to it. It's an act of violence against someone who's already been neutralised and chained up, one with long-lasting horrific consequences. No wonder Sherlock kept looking at the sky. But then, that's what happens when people can do whatever without reprisal, isn't it?
You are so good at writing action and plot - very exciting chapter. Nice to learn a bit more about Sherlock and glad John was helpful to the laguz. Yay for the Yard crew and Mrs Hudson as laguz. Hoping now that Sherlock is all right and they can live happily ever after (ish). Wondering now who the princess is...Irene? Molly? Mary Morstan :P No one we know?
Sherlock must have talk a lot about John so they spare him and trust him!
And John is so brave idk if i could have the guts to go to my possible death like that not knowing the plan! And figuring it out as he went! He is a total BAMF!
I hope Sherlock is alive!! But now i'm so sad poor Sherlock will never go home again if only to visit... And he is a Raven!
Also thay live so long!!! Poor John is considered a baby there! I hope Molly, Bill and Mike are alive too.
You made and awesome chapter and i loved General Lestrade giving orders! Asking the right questions and all!!!
And Mrs. Hudson is a hawk! Flailing! You make me remember the movie "Hudson hawk"
Favorite part: "It’s not very reassuring, but John keeps his mouth shut and does as told. All he has to do is keep his seat. That is literally all he has to do. That, and not die, but they all know the not-dying is always optional."
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The story of Sherlock losing his wings is horrific, more so becuase there's no purpose to it. It's an act of violence against someone who's already been neutralised and chained up, one with long-lasting horrific consequences. No wonder Sherlock kept looking at the sky. But then, that's what happens when people can do whatever without reprisal, isn't it?
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That's pretty much where I was going with that. Horrific and entirely off-screen due to the sheer amount of horrific. Abuse of power, man.
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The princess is a character from the game. No one we know.
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It's fascinating to see how much the animal characteristics get incorporated into the humanoid form.
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The laguz are just so much fun.
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Sherlock must have talk a lot about John so they spare him and trust him!
And John is so brave idk if i could have the guts to go to my possible death like that not knowing the plan! And figuring it out as he went! He is a total BAMF!
I hope Sherlock is alive!! But now i'm so sad poor Sherlock will never go home again if only to visit... And he is a Raven!
Also thay live so long!!!
Poor John is considered a baby there! I hope Molly, Bill and Mike are alive too.
You made and awesome chapter and i loved General Lestrade giving orders! Asking the right questions and all!!!
And Mrs. Hudson is a hawk! Flailing! You make me remember the movie "Hudson hawk"
I really love this verse!
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:)
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