FIC: -and that your bedroom is all up in flames K/L threesome fic NC-17

[beneath_ground]

Title: -and that your bedroom is all up in flames
Author: beneath_ground
Rating: So very NC-17
Word Count: 3600
Pairings: Kara/Lee/OFC
Summary: He’s always had a weakness for blondes, and Kara isn’t picky.
Warnings: Threesome (Kara/Lee/original female character). This here is pure porn. No plot. I don’t even think there’s dialogue. Just lots of sex.

Comments

[callmeonetrack]

Mmm. Visceral and sexy as hell (not that I'd expect anything less from you ;))! And I love the easiness between the pilots in this slightly AU verse. Nice job, lady!

[beneath_ground]

Thank you so much, Tara! That means a lot. It seems I cannot write angst or canon so I just stick with he porn. :) I want to give them things canon never did. Like a happy relationship and sex with a girl. ;) ;) thanks for commenting!

[callmeonetrack]

Ain't nothing wrong with that! Everyone has a skill, bb! But I think you're underselling yourself. This has a lovely tone and emotional quality, esp. At the ending when you focus on the tenor of their relationship and their tattooed ring fingers tangling. They're physically sated, but emotionally still quietly craving each other and their own comfortable partnership. Love that. <3

(Also we need more pilots porn in the universe. ;)

[beneath_ground]

Tara, this comment made me so, so happy. Seriously, it was so sweet and wonderful and thank you. :) thank you.

[beneath_ground]

It's just one big frak fest. :) :) I couldnt help myself, as soon as I saw your comments, I don't even remember where, I was like, ummm...they need to have a threesome RFN. Or maybe I do and I'm projecting? Hahaha.

I felt I almost had to justify Lee's behavior here, although I think being a man naked with two women is enough to go on. I mostly think that Lee's jealousy stemmed from always not being the one Kara chose or was with, and so I wanted to explore what it would mean to take her rejection away. And I think Lee would be a little more adventurous safe in the knowledge that she isn't going anywhere.

Anyway, enough of the analytical stuff. I'm glad you enjoyed the porn! Thank you so much. :) *blush* this is all high praise coming from you, who's work I regard vey highly.

I can't stand up.

[uberscribbler]

Rather, I don't dare stand up, lest I be arrested for "public indecency" or some such moralist rubbish.

Well done. Very well done.

Re: I can't stand up.

[beneath_ground]

Thank you! I drew inspiration from your work and it means a lot to hear this. Porn is way more fun than angst.

[embolalia]

This is delicious! Very sexy ;)

[beneath_ground]

Thank you! Sexy pilots can't help themselves. ;)

[beneath_ground]

Thank you! :)