A Winter Apart - Chapter 10

[beneath_silence]

Genre: Angst, romance
Rating: 15
Disclaimer: Plot's mine, but JE or the lyrics used here are not...and yes this is fiction!

Chapter 10

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baka - stupid/idiot
Itadakimasu - Let's eat.
moshi moshi - hello (telephone only)
Okasama/Otosama - a very formal way of addressing your mother/father respectively. Though here, Matsumi is addressing Jin's parents.

Comments

[arisan]

Great job once again! I'm still loving this fic. =3

I wonder what Matsumi will choose to do... will she prevent Jin from finding out the truth, or will she let Kame show it to him? Ah, so intense~~~~!

Much love!

[beneath_silence]

Aww thanks for reading! It's so nice to see your comment ^.^

I'm glad you're still loving it! I just wish I had more time to pay attention to it.

Thanks again for following! ^.^

[aikomidori]

Matsumi knows the whole story then? It seems like she does from her conversation...I wonder what role she'll play in the future. She's a pretty interesting character.

Yay for Akame dialogue ^_^ somehow it really seems like they haven't changed at all over the 6 years they've been apart...

Thank you for updating!!

[beneath_silence]

Ah thanks for reading!! It's good to read your comment ^.^

Yay for Akame indeed. Akame have matured in 6 years, but a few things will never change. Kame still cares for Jin, and Jin...well...we'll have to wait and see.

Thanks for the comment! ^.^

[suketeru]

"The gap between the sentences hung in the air and sat on their shoulders like an invisible weight which neither knew how to get rid of."

i liked that sentence. can't put the reason in words, but i really liked it. it made me stop and notice it ^^
the last jump into the past was really sweet. i think i was able to feel a bit of the atmosphere. it was a nice feeling ^^
hope you have a nice trip ^^ (what can be nice about being stuck in a plane for 13 hours!?! =_=)

[beneath_silence]

Ah glad you liked!! ^.^ It was a very simple description but I'm glad it got my feeling across. When two people are uncertain the silence in the air suddenly seems so heavy.

I thought I'd put in a little Akame happiness so I'm glad you liked it!

Thanks again for reading! (And yes a 13hr flight sucks...but it'd give me time to fic I guess which will be good.)

[suketeru]

time for you to fic = more stuff for us to read. yay ^^ i guess that's one good thing that can come out of it ^^ plus, getting to where you wanna go ofcourse! sometimes i just wish i could teleport myself places. that would be so awesome! just think of all the possibilities *dreaming*
btw, is Matsumi gonna turn into a bad person? i kinda had that feeling reading this part.... hmmmm i guess anyone would do anything to protect the ones they love ne. but we so wanna see akame together that anyone that interferes is gonna be labeled as BAD ^^

[taisukisg]

squeals* this fic is so sweet I can't help but fling my arms about in happiness whenever there's an update. lol. *pats kame* poor guy first he wants jin to remember him now he doesn't want him to. i bet baka jin is gonna forget to pick up matsumi at the airport because he's having too much fun at the con with kame chan...unless kame reminds him? nooo kame keep it a secret and hog up jin all to yourself ><~~~~~ then matsumi + akanishi family are all against kame and then jin will come to save the day!! weee~ ok enough of my silly imagination. thank you lots and lots more for the update =] after coming back from japan i was pleased to see alot of my fav fics updated. yay yay!

[evolution2x]

I love this story. I feel so sad for Kame. His life is so sad in this fic. I'm not sure if Matsumi is really nice or evil. I just get a feeling something will be happening there. For some reason she makes me feel she will do something bad to keep Jin. Keep writing you're good.