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beneath_silence

Fic: Footsteps (2/2)

Feb 17, 2008 12:53

Title: Footsteps (2/2)
Pairing: Akame
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I do NOT own JE, the lyrics or any of the characters mentioned below. This is entirely fictional!
Summary: Jin takes Kame home and remembers how much they use to share.
Credits: Credits also
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akame, footsteps

Comments 31

vintersaga February 17 2008, 20:51:09 UTC

*whibbles* This, this was beautiful. ♥

beneath_silence February 18 2008, 01:37:13 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^.^
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nekokonneko February 17 2008, 21:15:23 UTC

This is so beautifully written! And that header pciture just seemed to fit it perfectly. ::weeps::

beneath_silence February 18 2008, 01:39:35 UTC

Thanks thanks! ^.^ I haven't written in a while so it's nice to get positive feedback.

The header is quite old now lol! But yes it does kinda fit.

crovoxisikes February 17 2008, 23:14:22 UTC

LOVE IT :) IT'S BEAUTIFUL:)

beneath_silence February 18 2008, 02:37:08 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!

^.^

ravyn_ashling February 18 2008, 01:05:02 UTC

Nitpick! I hope you don't mind ^^:
>>had faded into just a mere reminisce.
-- is redundant. Just and mere are similar in meaning. :)

But ANYWAY!

;_; That was just so heartbreakingly beautiful. The way you wrote the boys was very much in-character, and damn.

Many people had always presumed him to be the steady one of the two, the sensible body in their AkaKame pair, but in truth Jin had always been his rock in the storm of entertainment world, always there to remind him that there was more to life, the one with a hand on his shoulder, the one who taught him to laugh at himself.

and

But Jin let himself lay bare to the world, faults, stupidity, gifts and all - and that was a courage Kame could not muster.

I am nodding at those so much. ♥ THANK YOU for writing so wonderfully. *off to rec*

beneath_silence February 18 2008, 02:41:40 UTC

Thank you for reading! I don't mind people being nit-picky I prefer it when people are because that's how one improves. So thanks for that!

I'm glad it hit a chord with you. I haven't written in so long I'm just happy it turned out okay. ^.^

^.^

lineelu2001 February 18 2008, 01:50:17 UTC

Guh! My heart breaks when I read this... However, It really is sooo beautiful... Though somehow I am hoping for fic with happier ending for the two of them soon.. uhuhu... ANyway, greaaaat job!

beneath_silence February 18 2008, 02:44:44 UTC

My heart breaks when I watch those two on screen now =_=" Seriously...the air is so stifling between them sometimes I wish someone would just clear it!

I will try and write a happy fic at some point...but I must admit they're not giving me great inspirations the way they're going =_=!

ANYWAY! Thanks for reading and the comment!

^.^