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Jun 27, 2005 03:38

I'm thinking of
eating you with ice cream.
seeing you round with my child
sliding this band on your finger
touching your lips while you sleep
kissing your mouth between words
trusting your hands
to carry my heart.

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from danni anonymous June 29 2005, 14:57:17 UTC
i updated.

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Re: from danni anonymous July 3 2005, 15:30:38 UTC
more this time.

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Re: from danni benedickofwit July 4 2005, 01:05:48 UTC
I was happy to see that you could manage a few more lines :)

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nice change of tone composemyself July 4 2005, 06:22:47 UTC
You write happy as well as you write angst. A rare talent. :)

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Re: nice change of tone benedickofwit July 4 2005, 19:18:04 UTC
glad to hear from you :)
I'd rather write happy, but sometimes the bitterness just won't allow that, eh?

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from the archives anonymous January 21 2006, 11:56:30 UTC
fingertips like a sea breeze
trace undulations
of body and ecstasy

I love you,
Lolly

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