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[benedickofwit]

The rains here are turning biblical

Comments

[sheebaqueen]

did you write that? its really good, its woah amasing, like actually makes sense and its meaningful.
-- from your, cute fringed year 10 girl boarding school friend.
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[benedickofwit]

Yeppers, I wrote it :)
Thanks! Hope the boarding school action is treating you well...
-C

[sheebaqueen]

boarding school is grreat, or not. had loadsa exams recently! that sucked. well yeah your poem is amasing. wow. its cool. and i <33 all the other ones youve written, congratulations on your poetic brilliance!!
- Emz

[loupguru]

Hey:)
I really like this! I'd love to learn more about yr inspiration here, but from the imagery in the beginning to the self-chastisement at the end, this is as well-written, strong, dreamy and yet intelligent poem.
bravo - that's not a small accomplishment!

[benedickofwit]

Very kind of you :)
Now it's your turn to update... dorkus

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[writerofthought]

This is...very...interesting for lack of a better word in my vocabulary but I like it.
-To what you said-
It helps, trust me.
I'm good how about you?