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benjamincurley

I Swear It Didn't Mean For It To Feel Like This

Sep 29, 2005 22:12

Ok, first thanks to Elizabeth for letting me in on Jack's Mannequin. I was listening to their CD and I love the song "Bruised" and as I was listening to it I came up for an idea for a story. So I invite you to read it, but I will warn you that it is not a kiddie story. It is not happy and it has a very creepy theme. I know it is kind of morbid ( Read more... )

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trulyemo1 September 30 2005, 02:45:10 UTC

hey, really enjoyed the story man.nice descriptions, it was really vivid.although if i may make a suggestion, possibly change the words "wet beans" to somethin else.they just didnt seem right to me, i dunno, i may be wrong, just my suggestion.It was a really sweet short story though.

stepherino September 30 2005, 04:07:52 UTC

I LOVE Jack's Mannequin! My favorite right now is Dark Blue by far but I love them all, including Bruised & Mixed Tape! TTYL DUDE!

glisteningrose September 30 2005, 21:33:57 UTC

you're welcome, and that is very morbid. but it was good. so. yeah.

tangerine08 October 1 2005, 00:01:09 UTC

Very good. I dont thnk it as particularly morbid. A little dark and mysterious, yes, but morbid no. It showed compassion. Deep Compassion. It showed the importance of love, and how even in the darkest of times it can bring you too happiness. Therefore, i dont consider this morbid. I consider this loving. Maybe my brains just efffed up, but thats what i think.

benjamincurley October 1 2005, 00:51:37 UTC

Dang it Meg, what is with you always making me seem like a good person? Why can't you stop looking at the bright side ;)