Tell me that my writing doesn't suck...

Aug 07, 2006 07:33

♥I need you like a heart needs to beat, but sometimes my heart skips a beat...So I guess I don't need you that bad.:-/...♥

Is that good?

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shadowstohidein August 8 2006, 00:03:35 UTC
I like it but I don't like that two lines in a row end in the same word.

And I like your icon.

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benjiwenji August 8 2006, 00:23:16 UTC
Help me fix it?

I miss you.

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