When You Said You Love Me Ch.6

Apr 20, 2009 21:44

Yamapi parked his car at the airport.He was sending Tegoshi’s big brother back to Kyoto.
“I’ll miss you a lot.” Tegoshi gave him a quick hug,
he was trying his best to not cry.
“Same here. I’ll miss to ruffle your hair
and tickle your side like what I’ve just done yesterday.”
Tegoshi laughed hard “You’ve never failed to make me laugh, Notti-nii.”
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tegopi, when you said you love me, yamashita tomohisa, tegoshi yuya

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tegomy April 20 2009, 15:33:58 UTC
“I love you…” Notti’s smile disappeared “…before I met him.”
What a heartbreak !_! Poor Notti =(
I wonder what's gonna happen in the next chap =)

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bennyaan April 20 2009, 16:09:22 UTC
yeah..I'm a meanie T^T gomen notti...
the next chap? I think there will be no angst in the next chap XD
thanks for reading and commenting <3

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yuyako16 April 20 2009, 16:08:25 UTC
omg!! you always update really fast.
to be honest i'd always thought that it would be notti and not massu since you already mentioned that notti is yuya's brother and you never mentioned massu being yuya's friend or relative or something. lol XD i'm great, aren't i? -gets kicked-

you should've added more kusatego moments to make it more interesting. but still, i love how it ended. pi comforted yuya in the end, yokatta~ i REALLY hope massu would somehow appear in the story. lol me and my wishful thinking. gomen. hihi XDD

update soon!!^^v i'll be waiting for your update :)

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bennyaan April 20 2009, 16:15:58 UTC
really? *sparkling eyes*
hahaha,yeah..you're great XD
I myself also quite surprised since there are so many who answer massu ^^
I want to, but it'll make my heart aches more than before T_T
I don't want to develope their feeling more than this,
it'll be more hurt in the end for kusa..and me too XP
hahaha, I don't have any idea of mentioning or inserting massu on this fic,but I definitely can see myself writing about massu in my next fanfic ^^ *but i haven't write anything coz this one take my whole brain to write XD*
thanks for your long comment <3 and thanks for reading ^^

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yuyako16 April 21 2009, 06:26:57 UTC
mukyaaaaa~ you agree with me being great. cool~ haha XDD -gets shot-
hmm. you have a point there. it'll hurt more for notti if you made their part longer than what you already wrote. i totally understand how you feel.

really?? then i'll definitely wait for that fic of yours. but who would massu's partner be? would it be yuya?? haha XDD and it's okay if you haven't updated. you should rest your brain first lol

and your avatar is awesome!! haha XDD i love it<3

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bennyaan April 22 2009, 10:29:14 UTC
HAHA XD
yeah,it's enough with notti for making me cry XD
and I made him cry once..
I don't wan't to make him suffers more *it's just a fanfic,nyaan*
hahaha,matta ne~
okay, I'll rest it XD
thank for the ava comment <3

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norbbiz April 20 2009, 18:12:44 UTC
:3

i'm really interested about what happens next.
this was very good chap. now waiting for the next one!! ^^

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bennyaan April 22 2009, 10:12:35 UTC
thank you so much~
and thanks for reading and commenting ^^ <3

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zxcvbnm109 April 20 2009, 20:01:44 UTC
poor Kusa....

“I love you…” Notti’s smile disappeared “…before I met him.”

so heartbreaking for Kusa...

but I do like how you handle the Kusa-Tego situation, how Kusa was just a guest appearance and KusaTego didn't go that deep... Like he just got rejected (even though Tego doesn't know) and he just left on a plane, plain and simple...Also, there's no rivalry between Yamapi and Kusa, which I think is great...lol...I'm so bias towards TegoPi...

great chapter AND bonus chapt...THX!

thx for keeping it a TegoPi centric fic! :)

here's the usual!:
please update asap =)

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bennyaan April 22 2009, 10:16:18 UTC
that line seems to be so popular XD
yeah, if by any chance tegoshi knows, it might be not a tegopi fanfic anymore XDDDDD
HAHAHAHA XDD it's Ok to be biased *lolol*
thank you for liking the way i wrote it,coz I've read many love triangle angst
and I ended up hating the one that i don't like XD
so I don't want people to feel the same way..
thanks for reading and commenting always <3 <3 <3

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privatehearts18 April 21 2009, 00:02:00 UTC
NYAAN~!!!why make Notti sad? T^T LOLz. *hugs* Love the story! Thanks for this!*hopes there's more kusatego fanfics in the world* XDD

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bennyaan April 22 2009, 10:18:28 UTC
sorry T_T actually I don't want to make him sad..
yeah, i need more kudatego writer XD
thanks for reading and commenting <3 <3

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privatehearts18 April 22 2009, 10:21:59 UTC
Ohhhh..hai! Really want that pairing to be famous ne..we need to gather up more writers. T__T
Ohhh..no problem! Will be looking forward to more KusaTego fics. XDD

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bennyaan April 22 2009, 11:15:23 UTC
yeah, we need to do so T_T
hehehehe..hehehehehe...
I can't wait to write kusatego XD

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