Comments | benosmash: My inspiration

benosmash

My inspiration

Mar 16, 2008 03:10

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poetry, poem, defeated, sleeping, depressed, sadness, unfortunate, beat

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fusionwhitestar March 17 2008, 00:11:20 UTC

thats o gay man. Congrats

benosmash March 17 2008, 00:32:52 UTC

Heh. thanks... I guess?

fusionwhitestar March 17 2008, 01:37:36 UTC

no prob, what are friends for?

benosmash March 17 2008, 01:43:58 UTC

lol. Apparantly to tell me when the poetry I write is "gay"

I was going for ohgodimsodepressedijustwantedtohearhersaysomething(nice)beforeiwenttobed.

I think that all I got was an emo gibberish that wasn't put into words all that well.

Oh, It should flow just a little better after I make a change (moving a stanza 1up)

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