A nice start, if not a little short. Andrew and Addison are both very different-looking; it'll be interesting to see how their genes combine!
One thing I'd like to suggest is that you not be like Andrew - and be less lazy! Don't forget to take pictures at crucial moments, especially where you mention you forgot to get pictures. The more pictures you have for a smaller amount of time means the more we see of the Sims, and thus the more we'll be able to connect with them. I'll also mention that you might want to start using LJ-cuts to hide portions of your entries in your main journal page. This way, when people begin to add you, whole entries won't have to load when they view their friends pages; that is a little annoying to most people.
If you think you'd like anymore help, feel free to post at simswritersclub, where helping writers is our specialty! :)
I'm sorry I never commented back. Your comment was very helpful. Don't think I was ignoring you or anything, but I just kinda forgot about this until a friend reminded me. I probably won't continue this legacy because of...well I pretty much just lost interest in this family, but I do have another one I've been planning on doing, so I will take your advice and run with it...over there. XD
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One thing I'd like to suggest is that you not be like Andrew - and be less lazy! Don't forget to take pictures at crucial moments, especially where you mention you forgot to get pictures. The more pictures you have for a smaller amount of time means the more we see of the Sims, and thus the more we'll be able to connect with them.
I'll also mention that you might want to start using LJ-cuts to hide portions of your entries in your main journal page. This way, when people begin to add you, whole entries won't have to load when they view their friends pages; that is a little annoying to most people.
If you think you'd like anymore help, feel free to post at simswritersclub, where helping writers is our specialty! :)
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