fanfic #1

[berkeley_mews]

My first fan-fic yo! It's called 'Subaru gets an earful'. That's a stupid title because he DOESN'T get an earful - like nobody yells at him or anything. Might try to think up another title.
Disclaimer: I've never read any Eito fanfiction so this doesn't really follow any conventions and has no pairing. It's actually very very boring, sorry in

Comments

[neitaro]

Pentagon XDDD

A very unique story ♥
I wonder who the little girl is! She's interesting!

[berkeley_mews]

haha who knows. maybe she was taeko when she was a kid. or maybe she's just a random brat.
awww thanks nei! ♥

[kyjr]

i'm not entirely sure where to begin because this is fantastic. i don't normally read eito fic, but i loved it <3

it was kind of cute and kind of sad. i love the part where the girl says it's fantastic that subaru's had his ears his whole life.

i love your writing style, it all flows so well <3333333

also the last line omg. subaru needs to grow his hair again because it was pretty and shiny.

[berkeley_mews]

thank you so much amy!!!!!! <333 yeah i wasn't sure about my writing style but that's really nice to hear! yes subaru and his stupid hair. :(

[xxcloud9]

'Shit.'

‘You’re lucky I didn’t hear that,’

XD

This was amazing as a short little piece :)). The style is definitely refreshing and caused soooo much imagery in my head. The setting I had in my mind was right in between of reality and fantasy, both with a clear blue sky /gives too many details because this was awesome :|a.

The whole first paragraph was a win btw. And i loved the little descriptions of Subaru being 'terminally unique' and of the girl not belonging to anyone. Which i didn't get to be honest, nor did I get the whole thing about his ears, which sucks because it sounds like it was an important part of the story.

I think I'm just over thinking, but stories like these have a natural feel of having something more to them than just what you read and stuff >_>.

Yaaaaaay \o/. I hope this isn't the last story you write and post and lemme read :DD.

<333

[berkeley_mews]

Thanks you Ana!!!! What you said about it being between 'reality and fantasy' - that's exactly what I was going for! You're the only person who's picked that up! Oh also I wanted some things to be open to interpretation too so I won't tell you the 'answers' XDD Yay I'll write some more thanks heaps again <333