Breakeven

[berryboys]

Title: Breakeven
Pairing: Chanyeol/Jongin, hinted Baekhyun/Jongdae
Word Count: 6,3k
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: smut, language
Summary: Sleeping with his ex, and on top of that, when Chanyeol was still in love with him, should be on the list of the worst self-damaging decisions he has made so far.
Notes: Betaed byshinealightrose , as usual :) I wrote this back on

Comments

[fukushimakyong]

BEST BDAY GIFT EVER

[berryboys]

Y luego tuvieron cachorros porque esto en realidad es un ABO AU.

[koshitsu_kamira]

Whoa okay, that was so complex

[berryboys]

(Complex... only an excuse to smut LMAO).
I was hoping someone could sympathise despite how "crazy" they are for each other, I feared that they would be this couple that no one likes because they are just so stupid. It's like when this situation happens in real life, a lot of friends decide to give you the back if you come back to someone who has hurt you, like Jongin did to Chanyeol.
I'm so intrigued by Chanyeol and Jongin's dynamic, they fit together well, maybe too well, so I've been wondering while reading if this relationship can be considered healthy - I'm no wiser at the end~ This is the thing, who knows if Baekhyun and Jongdae are right? Chanyeol is too in love in here, so he may be a bit blind/delusional when it comes to Jongin (Am I even capable of writing completely healthy relatioships? I don't know anymore xD). I get your annoyance towards Baekhyun, because he definitely doesn't carry the 'problem' in the right way

[xxhna]

well... damn. ok. what is it that they love each other in a way that others cannot see or understand. even as i reader, i have a tough time understanding this. i can understand baekhyun being super protective, though its borderline annoying. but the thing is they are both vulnerable. jongin is not necessarily broken, though i think chanyeol is, but he definitely has issues that he has trouble dealing with. its problematic really. it'd be nice if two people loved each other, that they could just be together and live happily ever after, but that's rarely the case. thats what i really enjoyed about this. this situation happens much more often in real life. but even though they are secretly together now, i think they have much more growing to do.. but it'll be better because they have each other, and at least there's one other person who understands them besides themselves.

[berryboys]

Hi! Jongin and Chanyeol's relationship is quite complicated, but you are right about Chanyeol is 'broken'. He loves Jongin in a way that could be harmful for himself, and while Baekhyun is completely against forgiving Jongin, Chanyeol is disposed to forgive anything, even to blame himself for whatever Jongin does wrong. They're like two extreme points of view, and of course Chanyeol has to deal with that extremely adoring conduct to have a sane relationship with Jongin. Like you said, at least they understand each other, even if it's the mad part about them haha.

[anya_azrael]

Moreso than the story i really love the style this was written in as soon as i read the first two paragraphs i was just sucked in its amazing

[berryboys]

thank you!! I changed the style a bit because I wanted this to be short, so I don't know how it came out xD

[berryboys]

/pats heart/

/metaphorically of course lol/