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mollyana July 6 2015, 21:12:00 UTC
Ooh i love everything about this, is still as adorable and hot as the first time i read it. I believe the characterizations and the abo universe you picture are enough to pull us in.

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berryboys July 8 2015, 00:30:40 UTC
It's nice to know you like it after a second read too <3 I love thinking about abo AUs and how their world would be like, though this one ended lacking a bit haha. Thank you so much ;)

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yuliya_raven July 17 2015, 19:34:57 UTC
it's like WTF where i was that i read it this late?? this is so good, /so good/.
i've never imagined jongin being all this cheeky omeganist (can i say it like this? idk), sexy, free and wanting sehun as his first time. and sehun was like this really good guy that don't want to take you virginity no matter how many time you ask him. and it's all connected with love but stupidity (mostly on sehun's side i guess?).
these characters are so new, it's so original, unlike most of a/b/o ff even unlike most of sekai ff.
i felt in love with this jongin with his behavior, disrespect and carelessness (go jonginnie!!1)
anyways, THANK YOUUU, i love you and want to marry you so our kids could be as amazing as you

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berryboys July 19 2015, 22:57:28 UTC
OMEGANIST IS SUCH A GOOD TERM, THANK YOU XDD I laughed imagining Jongin saying he's an omeganist, and people looking at him like 'I thought Sehun would help you, but he didn't'. Okay, excuse and ignore my silly stuff.
Thank you for your sweet comment! I don't know if you should have kids with me though o.0 If they got the worst parts of me, we would be screwed lmfao.
You're right, they're both stupid, but it's more fun to write when the characters are this stubborn (maybe it's annoying for the readers though? lol). But especially this Jongin is in my heart, because like you say he's "disrespectful", the good kind ;). On the other hand, this Sehun is so non-canon, I'm certain a more real Sehun would bang Jongin once he had the tiniest chance xD.
Thank you again <33 (and sorry, I talk too much).

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yuliya_raven July 20 2015, 18:22:41 UTC
oh gosh, i reread my comment and i really don't know how could you understand it, my english skills could only wish for more, i'm sorry, all i can do to myself is just facepalm haha i tried to say about my feelings but my english is not enough.
and i think our kids would be amazing bc person who has ideas like THIS in her head could not be that bad. stop underestimating yourself. just stop it. i've read this before going to sleep and the next morning i was still thinking about it. and then the next day. and then i decided to leave a comment because i just could't. thank you. THANK YOUUU. think about my offer, though

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berryboys July 21 2015, 18:42:44 UTC
Hahah don't say that, it's perfectly understandable. In fact, since english isn't my first language either, I don't even notice most of other people's mistakes ^^ (coughdoyounoticeminecough)
I'm glad you ended leaving a comment though! It's always good to know what people think of the fic (especially if it's positive lol), so thank you for opting for that at last. Hahaha I will think about the kids ~

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berryboys July 22 2015, 12:48:29 UTC
T.T Are you trying to make me cry? Hahaha it's nice to know someone identifies with Jongin here! I hope that means that he's a believable character, though he can be very stubborn sometimes - he needed the opposite of him, Sehun, to balance.
Of course Jongin is a sweetheart! He's like a ball of cuteness, and every day it's more difficult for me to write him as a heartbreaker, even if it's good for a change (but he breaks my heart anyways, everytime ¬¬). You can bet I'll keep writing Jongin ^^. It's like a force of nature, it doesn't matter what I'm writing, I'm always tempted to at least mention him. I would probably break any pairing to transform it into a Jongin ship, but people would hate me for trolling xDDD
And thank you again for your comments!! You're a sweetheart too, just like Jongin ;)

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soojins October 19 2015, 08:41:11 UTC
I must confess that i've only read like three top!sehun kaihun fics so far
because I'm not a fan of it but... I just can't say no to good fanfiction.
Look, I suck at giving good comments and explaining my feelings
towards something I love lol so I'll be pretty quick.
I love this ;__________; It's perfect and I love it and I just want to drown
myself in this marvelous work.
Thank you for sharing this beauty with us♥

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berryboys November 16 2015, 13:04:09 UTC
I'm happy to see you gave this a chance then! :) Even if you don't fancy top sehun much. Thank you for your sweet words (you don't suck at giving comments! haha) and for reading it <3

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senbonsakura August 6 2017, 16:19:04 UTC
I'm so glad I found this fic. Jongin is so unconventional and Sehun is drives me mad for being so conservative! What matters is they are together in the end. Jongin bit Sehun lol.
Love that so much. And of course all their friends too.

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