Tritagonist

[berryboys]

Title: Tritagonist
Pairing: Chanyeol/Jongin, side! Sehun/Suho
Word Count: 10,6k
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: smut, language, tattooed Chanyeol?
Summary: Jongin thinks that trouble can't chase him. He doesn't like bad boys, illegal races, drugs or gambling, and he manages to keep Jongdae safe as well. But in the end trouble definitely chases after him,

Comments

[fukushimakyong]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FINALLY

[berryboys]

heh it took me an eternity

[koshitsu_kamira]

Ohohohohoho~ One should always look out for the quiet ones, right? :D

I really enjoyed this AU, and I'm all kind of curious about Jongin's story in high school and ChanKai as a couple - they have a very intriguing dynamic here. *___* By the way this oneshot(?) ended a bit abruptly - the build up was super nice - I think you can sense the unlocked potential in this set up as well.

Many thanks for this overwhelmingly hot ChanKai!

I'm sending you ♥♥♥~

[berryboys]

You should look out for the loud ones too. Just look at Jongdae haha.

I'm glad you enjoyed it <3 I know it ends abruptly (because I'm that lazy? maybe. Because I'm a bit cynical and probably would have messed up their relationship if I had kept writing? probably xD). I'm flattered that you think this has potential though, so thank you!

I'm keeping that ♥♥♥ then!

[yuraxchan]

Hot damn.
It was amazing and I wouldn't mind reading more ♥
I'm so in love with your KaiYeol's dynamic ;-; well, i'm in love with KaiYeol so it helps but your plot is really interesting. Jongin is a cutie, and Chanyeol is one of a kind! Tattoos & boxing...best combo!
I love Jongbros' relationship as well and...TaeKai...my guilty pleasure <3
Also, SeHo. You wrote some of my fav pairings here huhu~
I want to know more about KaiYeol's relationship, like it can't be as easy for them to be finally together right? Between Chanyeol's activity and Jongin's wariness of bad boys...Anyway, what a good AU!

Thanks for writing and sharing ♥

[berryboys]

<3 And I wouldn't mind write more if it wasn't for the endless list of fics waiting to be written in my head lol.

I know you love kaiyeol! I might... have stalked your LJ a bit... (actually I have a handful of fics of yours bookmarked lol). Anyways, I'm happy you liked it! I think taekai is everyone's guilty pleasure, and not guilty at all (because they're so canon).
Yes! I also think it wouldn't be that easy for them, so the end is kind of a big question mark. I'm not that fond of sequels but who knows, maybe someday I'll feel angsty and write how difficult or easy their relationship was xD.
Don't thank me ~ Thank you for reading and commenting!

[yuraxchan]

I feel you omfg i have so many fics to write too...sobs

I know you love kaiyeol! I might... have stalked your LJ a bit... (actually I have a handful of fics of yours bookmarked lol)

REALLY??? This is so cute ;-; Thank you ♥

Yes, we shouldn't feel guilty of liking TaeKai, you're right! They ship themselves after all ;)

Don't worry, as i writer i know how you feel about sequels lmao i said i would write some...but...yeah >.> Anyway, i wasn't asking for a sequel or anything but i think you could write more of this AU in the future if you feel inspired and if you like writing it ^.^ Sometimes it's nice to keep the ending open if there's potential to write more!

Of course i have to thank you! :) ♥

[berryboys]

lol too many fics and too little time.
Don't thank me, I'm dying for reading that taekaihun, especially!

It's hard to write sequels when new ideas keep coming up haha. The struggle! Honestly, this open ending is more a result of my laziness, but don't tell xD.

[fukushimakyong]

I'm gonna write a nicer (and longer) comment now to express my feelings about this.

I was surprised when you told me that you had started writting this and now I couldn't be happier OTL

I LOVE the way you wrote Jongdae, like a trouble seeker, I had so much fun reading his antics used on the boys he flirted with and I definitely am curious as hell about what happened with Baekhyun. I'm this restless LOL.

Seho will forever be in my heart. I mean, the hardcore sex they performed the first morning made me stop reading to laugh my ass off.

And bad boy tattoed Chanyeol, like JESUS. I kind of moaned when Jongin described him laying on his couch and later when Jongdae invited him into their house.

But I didn't know when we were talking about this fic when you were writting it that illegal boxing is without using the gloves, I was SOCKED.

Maybe I'll tease you enough for you writting a bit more of this?

Besis

[berryboys]

(Lo primero de todo, Chanyeol en tu foto parece una maruja).

I know you can be happier, think about the family AU lol. We all know Jongdae is a trouble seeker in real life, anyways (who can believe that angel's façade ¬¬). And what happened with Baekhyun... perhaps Jongdae was a very tiring boyfriend that wanted him to stop selling sex. MAYBE. Or maybe not. Jongdae's boys are mean people. I don't really know if it's with or without gloves LOL. I just thought "fight club style yeah".
Don't you dare to tease me anymore! you'll have to suffer another silly fic like this one.

Puñitos en tu cara.

[fukushimakyong]

(Mi marujo guapo 8/)

What? Maybe? I'll take that for a yes, because I'm this cheeky.

I'm WHILLING to suffer another fic like this ; D

[charliebnim]

Muahhaahah for crying out loud.... The good guys are always the worst !!!*

[berryboys]

Hahah aren't they? ^.^ But Jongin can put the blame on his friends and say he's still a good guy!