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[Fanfiction] The Promise 8/10

Sep 21, 2011 14:54

Title: The Promise 8/10
Authors: sakuratsukikage and berseker
Rating: PG-15
Pairings: Brazil/Argentina
Summary: Luciano struggles to believe, and Martín thinks about something completely different.

( Luciano didn’t sleep as well as he thought he would. )

the promise, fanfiction, latin_hetalia, br/arg

Comments 10

melissa_42 September 21 2011, 18:55:25 UTC

AKLJ;DSADSKLJF;ADSKLJF; YOU POSTED RIGHT WHEN I HAVE TO LEAVE!!

I'll read this and write a proper comment when I get home later this evening. If I can't think straight during my tutoring lessons, I'm holding you responsible. xD

berseker September 21 2011, 23:45:27 UTC

OPS I'M SORRY

I hope you won't find it disappointing orz /hides to wait

melissa_42 September 22 2011, 02:46:23 UTC

Pssht, your writing is never disappointing.

You know, I'd never thought about how much trust Martín must have put in Luciano by going to the plantation with him, but it makes sense, and he was probably wondering why Luciano didn't see it.

And the conversation about Luciano's sex life is just so asfjal;skdfja because of course Martín would feel intimidated and awkward and fail so hard at hiding his feelings. BE GENTLE, LULU

berseker September 24 2011, 00:56:36 UTC

Aaaw THANK YOU ♥ I'm relieved <3

And I think Luci is still a little stuck in the mindset he used to have, or something like that. Like, sometimes he forgets where he is now, and still sees himself as the vulnerable kid he was. So he misses things. And Martín has to deal with a lot of frustration in the past days, poor thing.

And eeeeh we were going for this reaction. Luci needs to learn how to shut up...

oreo_ornament September 21 2011, 20:00:17 UTC

YOU YOU YOUUUUUU HOW DARE YOU LEAVE A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT GNFDJKGHDFKJGHDGKJDHKJ I CAN'T HOLD ALL THESE FEELINGS

I'm grinning like an idiot but at the same time I'm raising my eyebrows and thinking "wow, these boys move fast".

(I'm...not going to complain. Cough.)

berseker September 21 2011, 23:44:51 UTC

CLIFFHANGER WHAT CLIFFHANGER /innocentface ^__^

Feelings are good, I'm glad you have them. And... yes, they do. They really do. Most of their... big decisions happened very fast, they're just intense like that ... or silly, you decide.

Thank you for commenting! <3

oreo_ornament September 22 2011, 00:33:06 UTC

CHULINITA, YOUR INNOCENT EXPRESSIONS WON'T WORK ON ME! But I did tell you on tumblr already how this made my bad day so much better, but thank you again. (It really did mean a lot to me, but I'm a silly person like that.)

I'm looking forward to the next installment! I'm hoping I'll have to read it in my bathroom due to all the steam, if you catch my drift. ;D

berseker September 24 2011, 00:30:43 UTC

I AM VERY INNOCENT OK

( ... )

darhia September 22 2011, 03:07:48 UTC

It's funny how they're both so confident in their own personal ways, but when it comes to actually talk things out, it's like watching two little boys trying to talk about sex for the first time.

My stomach feels messy just by thinking they'll finally end with all the doubts and the fears and everything that still comes in the way once they'll give this step. "Unforgettable" is a big promising word.

berseker September 24 2011, 00:17:14 UTC

Heh, yes. I think they do that to each other, maybe because they're completely unable to understand what the other is thinking... or maybe because people in love are a bit silly ^^

And aaaw this reaction pleases me. And yes, that's what Luci gets for talking more than he should... now he'll have to live up to it.