[Fanfic] A Ghost Story

[berseker]

Title: A Ghost Story
Rating/Warning: ... free, I guess. Of course, you'll have NIGHTMARES, because, you know. Ghosts.
Pairings: Brazil/Argentina
Summary: Random AU. Martín goes to Brazil, and then he finds a ghost.

Comments

[riot_of_flowers]

Spooky, endearing and sweet, I just don't know how you do it, Ber, but you always manage to pull off the most improbable and exciting scenarios ever.

I loved it, it was sad and happy and perfect <3

Thank you for this <3

[berseker]

Thank you, darling ♥ I'm glad you liked it! I love these two so much, and it's fun to see how they interact in different universes...

So gracias ^^

/ghostly kisses

WHERE'S A CRYING ICON WHEN YOU NEED IT?

[darhia]

Because I'm crying here, right now and I just knew it. I got this feeling you would make me cry in the end the entire time and Halloween is for- for blood sliding down the walls and young stupid teenegers screaming for anything and here I am, crying my stupid heart out because dammit- I miss Luciano so much.

It's just that... I imagine him running to the stadium and having this unfair accident, but he was just so excited about this being his first game that he wouldn't even notice and he would be there, stuck in his dream alone for ten long years, missing and waiting in that dark place all alone and God, he's resting in peace now and I can't stop crying. I just can't. He said he could come again one day, that they could play again, he said it, he wanted him to stay because he was so alone but he was the one to leave in the end and that's good because he needed to rest in peace and you know what? I'm not making any sense because I just want to hide under the sheets and keep crying

&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;

[berseker]

♥♥♥♥

/HUUUUGS

I love your comments so much. It's- it's hard to explain, but you always see it from inside the story, and it's so awesome, because - well, this is what I was trying to do, I wanted it to be... idk, sad but no but yes, you know?

And I think this would only work for these two, because this dream would be big enough to keep Luciano stuck in the limbo, and Martín is one of the few in the world who can understand perfectly why, and see why it was so important. And in some things they're more alike than both of them suspect.

So, thank you so much for your comment, it made me very selfishly happy orz ♥

(... can't believe I'm blushing.)

[darhia]

Because you are an amazing writer, that's why.

I think that's what made it more painful to read: you can totally picture Luciano in that situation, it's real on its own way. And how he denies the truth because it hurts him, how everything. Besides I still giggle when I imagine this two hugging and crying manly tears of joy; too bad I didn't save that "keep calm and..." pic about football, it was totally made for this two.

[oreo_ornament]

*crying*

[berseker]

♥♥♥

Gracias, bb <3

[oreo_ornament]

THIS STILL MAKES MY HEART HURT.
I WON'T FORGIVE YOU, EVEN IF YOU USE CUTE ICONS.

[berseker]

NOOOO LOOK AT THEM MARTÍN IS A KITTY. JUST. LOOK.

[melissa_42]

This is awesome! The characters work really well for this type of story - Lu would be the friendly ghost who has sudden bouts of despair and loneliness, and Martín would be the guy who doesn't really mean to care but does. I just want to hug everyone abuuuuuu <3

[berseker]

Thank you! This idea came sort of from nowhere (I'm lying, it came from watching Corpse Bride videos, but the story has nothing to do with it so yeah), so... I'm glad it worked <33

[zulenha]

ENTÃO
ESSA FIC
QUASE ME MATOU DO CORAÇÃO.

Ainda não entendi como você conseguiu me fazer rir que nem uma idiota no início (eu estava fazendo MINGAU sozinha na cozinha e rindo, rindo loucamente. Ainda bem que ninguém foi ver o que tava acontecendo comigo) e depois. Você vai me chamar de boba, mas meu coração doeu >_< Eu nunca liguei pra histórias de fantasmas, mas essa me fez ficar com cara de Ó______Ò e depois chorar que nem criança DDDDD': LULUUU MEU AMOR ;A; Só de pensar que ele ficou sozinho tanto tempo esperando pra realizar o sonho dele ;A; e precisou desse argentino bobo pra finalmente conseguir, e ele ficou tão feliz e ele era tão novinho e... aaaaaaaaaahhhhh ;A; ;A; ;A;

Um dia eu vou decobrir seu segredo, Bernadete ;AAAAA; ... ou não, é melhor não, assim a ~magia~ se mantém. /nods

[berseker]

DDD8 MAS TEM UM FINAL FELIZ

IF YOU SQUINT

SORT OF

Mas tipo então meu evil plan funcionou ;3; eu queria fazer uma coisa tipo q não soasse melodramática mas que fosse mais tristinha pq, bom, ghosts, automaticamente tem alguém MORTO. Fico feliz q tenha tido esse efeito ;3; (e não sei como vc leu fazendo mingau, pq a fic está no computador, e mingau tem q ficar mexendo, como isso se deu)

E acho que futebol é uma coisa tão relevante pro nosso bebê que seria um assunto inacabado, e o Tinchito é a pessoa mais perfeita do mundo pra entender e pegar o espírito da coisa.

Mas devo confessar que matar o Luluzinho ME DEPRIME OK ele fica mais lindo e fofo VIVO. SO THERE.

/I'm full of secrets
/... desaparece misteriosamente

[zulenha]

NÃO É FELIZ, É MELANCÓLICO. SE FOSSE FELIZ O LULU ESTARIA VIVO. E HAVERIA BESOS.

Sim, ficou lindo ;a; Não ficou melodramático nem exagerado, ficou - triste daquele jeito que você tem vontade de sorrir e abraçar alguém e depois CHORAR wtf olha o que você me faz. (...meu computador é um laptop, eu deixei na bancada ao lado do fogão e fui mexendo enquanto lia 8D)

DEVERAS. Era o sonho da vida dele e ele ia REALIZÁ-LO, e era algo tão importante pra ele que ele não conseguiu simplesmente se desligar e ir pro plano superior/céu/o que seja. É bobo e ao mesmo tempo não ;A; Sim, o Tincho entenderia porque ele é tonto igual ao Lulu nesse aspecto ;3;

TAMBÉM ACHO. ESCREVA COISAS DELE VIVO AGORA.

/conheço todos 8Da
/not really, mas alguns ok