[Fanfic] Mi Buenos Aires Querido

[berseker]

Título: Mi Buenos Aires Querido
Personagens/Pairing: Br/Arg
Rating/Warning: Meninos sem roupa tomando banho juntos, levíssimas referências à crises financeiras.
Sumário: Luciano visita Buenos Aires, e tem um ataque de insegurança. Martín entende tudo errado, como sempre

Comments

[ilye_aru]

Está mais louco que de costume. Está me deixando nervoso. Tem lindas pernas. Raios. O que ele podia dizer?

LUCI PLS.

This was so cute! I love how Martín is always so defensive and how Luci is... well, how his words usually just FLOW and he speaks before he thinks but sometimes he thinks and when he does think, it's too much. And they are just... a little bit awkward and a little bit right and everything in between and siduhsdugh STUPID, ADORABLE, SILLY BABIES. Also, as ever, your narrative is gorgeous and I always enjoy it, especially in Portuguese.

[berseker]

His legs are distracting ok ;33;

And Luci is an idiot omg and Martín can't understand his specialness for the life of him, so... the only solution is showering together wait what

GRACIAS KASITA SPANISH IS CUTER /glomps you <3

[darhia]

I find Luciano's line of thoughts so endering, not only because this was beautifully written but because somehow I had the same idea with Martín.

Once I said that the only thing that saddens me about them is that I believe they are slowly growing apart from each other, because Brazil has changed so much (I know we can't think you don't have any problem at all, but from this side of the world it's basically like your country became Narnia or something along those lines) and somehow it seems like Argentina will never stop falling down a little more every single day and we know how this works. In my head, Martín is sure Luciano will go away sooner or later because that is how things work and it wouldn't be the first time for someone to leave his side and the fact that Luciano thinks or used to think that way (for different reasons, but it's the same feeling or so it sounds like) is endering and makes things even more depressing than it already were

[berseker]

Eeeh thank you ♥

I think this is something recurrent in their relationship... and Luci wonders if Martín really wants this, because from his side sometimes it feels like Tincho is not even trying, that he doesn't really treasure what they have. But that's because Luci is silly and he sucks at reading Martín.

And the idea that they might break apart some day makes me VERY DEPRESSED D: but I think it would be impossible... they're too intertwined, and even when they were hardly speaking there was a lot of contact, so... you're not getting rid of us any time soon.

/HUGS

Reading Portuguese *like a boss* It's only fair, after all

[oxiosa]

You know, it's kind of funny how both are sulking for the same damn thing but in different kind of ways. I mean, both are thinking the other one is somehow "superior", Luci by envying and getting upset over Buenos Aires, and Tincho by thinking Lu's not impress with him and finds him simply dull. Different factors, same product.

I have this headcanon that Martín misses really bad his golden days... those times when he was all he always wanted to be, all he could be, all he once was and no longer is. And he brags about it, likes others to remember how big he used to be and now pretends to be, but it hurts him deep inside to think about those times and even more to know that he's no longer that wealthy country he long ago was.

And I'm always happy to get a glimpse of Luci’s mind and skin <3

YAY PORTUGUESE FTW 8D

[berseker]

Luci is always so, so surprised when he sees Martín's insecurities (fun fact: when I started to research him a century ago, I was VERY SHOCKED TOO omg because Martíiiiiiin). And they have this... mirror-like thing, sometimes, especially now. I think sometimes Luci reacts to Martin like he used to in the golden days, because to him Martincito is still awesome, even if Martin himself has his doubts...

I share your headcanon. I think the whole process was very painful for him, because he remembers how he used to feel. And to Luci is different, because only now he's starting to be respected, and he doesn't get Martín's nostalgic intense soul.

... which is why they need to get naked to have serious conversations 8D

thank you for commenting ♥

[sleepyshell]

Oh my God! This is just so beautiful!
I love how Luciano is so unsure of himself, but he keeps trying not to think about that, he keeps telling himself he's been self centered and in a way he is. I love how you made it sound so natural, there on the details, how utterly beautiful he thinks Martin is and how that has a huge influence on his own insecurities. You can feel how hard it is for Luciano to compliment him in this pride game of theirs. And it's Luciano's POV, but it's so well showed how Martin has his flaws and fears too. And how Martin is constantly trying to understand why Luciano is acting different is just so- I don't even know. Because it's the intimacy they seek, but it's also scary and makes one vulnerable. Luciano seems so hesitant about saying some things, about the emotions showing on his face. GOD THE DETAIILS. And it's just so amazing that in the end what they fear is the same.

Voce eh muito genial, querida. Fiquei emocionada.<3

[berseker]

♥♥♥♥ omg english comment

Thank you, love! Poor Luci, he's struggling to be nicer and to get a grip, but Martín just... overwhelms him. I think everytime he thinks about Martin's qualities, it kinda implies that he's not as awesome himself (I think we can see it when people visit Argentina, there's always this 'why can't we be more like that' vibe, I think). And Martín has no idea, because Luci can't admit it to him or he'll lose the game.

Thank you so, so much for your comment, and thank you for making it so detailed <3<3<3 it brightened up my day, I love hearing your thoughts <3

/abraça ♥