[Fanfic] 1/3

[berseker]

Title: Untitled for now 8l1/3
Warnings: This is a slave fic, but not as creepy as they usually go. Weird content, a bit of violence, lots of tears and screaming (but no sexual abuse at all, in case you're wondering)
Pairings: Luciana/Martina.
Summary: Luciana is hired to take a slave to the mines. WILL SHE BE ABLE TO DO IT?

NOTE: Ok, another

Comments

[zulenha]

Eu diria que essa é a coisa mais estranha que você já escreveu, mas eu estaria mentindo \o/

SÓ ESPERO QUE VOCÊ CONSERTE ESSA SITUAÇÃO E ELAS FUJAM JUNTAS PELAS PRADARIAS OK

[berseker]

IDK eu ainda acho a do martingatito mais estranha :3333 \o/

e a Lulu tem q ser profissional ok não pode sair fugindo com escravinhas bonitas isso pega mal D8

[cucolla]

Omg i'm crying, like literally. My favorites scenes are when Blondie (love this nickname to Martina) says to Luciana she wishes she was took and enslaved and the parts where Luciana think about his father. Wow.It was great, horrible and great.

[berseker]

♥ Thank you! Here Martininha is barely holding herself together, and Luci has a knack for hitting where it hurts...

thank you for commenting <3<3

[ilye_aru]

OKAY LJ JUST DELETED MY COMMENT BUT MY GOD MARTINA MADE ME CRY WHAT THE FUCK IS LUCIANA DOING AND OH MY GOD Apoifdsdfoigjfpogidufgpoifdiu

LADYFIC

(... i'll leave a serious comment tomorrow I SWEAR)

[berseker]

KASI STAHP DON'T BE DELETING THINGS GIVE THEM TO ME

and Luci is CONFUSED with Martina's rebellious ways and general weirdness who can blame her omg

(/BITES YOUR CHEEKS)

[zewod]

Oh my what a fic

you know is been a long since i dont read something that long in english... or a fanfic in fact. I'm really glad I saw this X)

This was really intriguing, I understand why lu behaves the way she does because, what options does she have? Being a slave always have sad and unfair histories behind. And she must be tough to survive in the world she is living there. Also being born from a slave, one can imagine her having empathy and she does but no pity. Instead it makes her endure real shit and expect the same to others. Despite it all, I think she is really nice and Martina, even tough justified, too way hard to handle

I like the fact she have a strong pride despite it all. And I'm very curious about the reasons it bring her to that situation. Are the owners or is martina lying? I know it does not matter really since its unfair form the view you have about it. But I'm still curious

I wanting impatiently for the next chapter o/

[berseker]

Hello there!

I'm really glad you liked it! I wanted that to come across... being the daughter of a slave made strange things to Luci's personality, because she might be sorry, but she saw her dad go through it and no one saved him, so she doesn't feel inclined to save anyone. And Martininha is... just charming all the time :3

I'll post the next one soon <3<3 thank you for commenting!

[melissa_42]

Ahhhhhhh I want MORE

I especially like the parts when Martina tries to fix her hair and her dress, as ratty as it is. It's just such a great way to show how she tries to keep her pride intact even when she's in such a crappy situation.

Now Luluci just has to open her heaaaaaaaaaaart and save her. ;_______;

guuuh relevant icon <3<3

[berseker]

<3<3

She's a proud baby no matter what ehehe crappy situation YES THIS IS ONE

Luci is not charmed by her sweet disposition yet :( BUT SHE'LL BE

PROBABLY