Comments | berseker: Slavefic 2/3

berseker

Slavefic 2/3

Feb 06, 2013 20:54

Warnings: This is a slave fic, but not as creepy as they usually go. Weird content, a bit of violence, lots of tears and screaming (but no sexual abuse at all, in case you're wondering)
Pairings: Luciana/Martina.
Summary: Luciana is hired to take a slave to the mines. WILL SHE BE ABLE TO DO IT?

( Luciana entered the room again when night fell. )

fanfiction, latin_hetalia, br/arg

Comments 9

cucolla February 7 2013, 00:06:30 UTC

My good It's so good and so incredible sad and I want to punch both but probably Luciana would beat me with one finger. And I was like, ok, it's cool, I can handle this and then there was that part when Luciana went ater her father and ask Martina where is her family and I was like Lol NOPE, I can't T____T. I love the description of the insect, the stories about the forest, the pirate attack, everything. This is really great.

Thanks for sharing

berseker February 8 2013, 17:30:50 UTC

Thank you for the awesome comment! ♥

I think Luci had some trouble measuring the... idk weight of her cruelty. She lashed out because she wanted to hurt, and then it got way out of line, poor Tinchita. And I'm glad the forest description works!

thank you <3<3<3

zulenha February 7 2013, 00:19:52 UTC

TADINHA DA MARTINA DDDDD8 Esse provavelmente não foi o pior dia da vida dela porque ela parece ter uma vida bem shitty, mas tá chegando perto ;3; Víboras e vespas, EU HEIN. QUE LUGAR ASSOMBRADO.

Quero saber quando a Lulu vai enchê-la de abraços ;~;

berseker February 8 2013, 17:34:59 UTC

;OOOO; PENSE PELO LADO BOM PODIA TER SIDO UMA BARATA víboras são mais amigáveis ;3333;

A Lulu não poderá resistir, logo ela se renderá ao charme fatal da Tinchita e vai pega-la no colo or something ;3;

ilye_aru February 7 2013, 04:28:10 UTC

i want to cry and scream at them and then i want to cry on the floor and die because they are killing me and then i want to hug Martina and maybe Luciana and then SOB WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME BABIES STUPID BABIES

berseker February 8 2013, 17:46:14 UTC

DON'T DIE KASITAS I NEED YOU ALIVE

but you can hug them because they're silly babies who are hurting each other with their silliness and Lulu was mean 8(

Holly Jungle updates!!! zewod February 7 2013, 07:14:08 UTC

I hope you dont mind I was listening to this song while I was reading the fic, because jet jaguar is the best.

They were kinding btw XDDD, the real lyrics are this cute. Somehow it remind me of luci and martine because they initially were enemies and Godzilla is that insane and kind of emotional and Jet jaguar cant understand him... but they are bros now. I guess, well jet guess

Re: Holly Jungle updates!!! zewod February 7 2013, 07:17:35 UTC

... Damm Lj issues ( ... )

Re: Holly Jungle updates!!! berseker February 8 2013, 18:26:26 UTC

(hehe the song can be in the movie soundtrack, it would be COOL)

I must admit that I have this weird thing about hair, it's not exactly a kink or anything but I LOVE IT OMG. And Martina's hair is so fun to touch (I feel the same way about male!Tinchito) with that crazy ahoge <3 so I'm glad you liked that!

And yes, Luci was really cruel. She's confused too, because she must do this job but now she's starting to care about Tininha but she also didn't like the stuff she said... she has her own open wounds that she need to solve.

And it's a fun ship, we have mate and dulce de leche 8D

thank you for commenting!! ♥♥♥