[Fanfic] TFHOL 17/19

Mar 09, 2013 21:45

Title: The Flying Heart of Love 17/19
Rating: Pgish, sort of. Maybe not.
Characters: In this chapter, María, Maddie, Jake, Manu, Sebas, Henrique, Antonio, and a few surprises.
Warnings: This is an AU, so you'll have to ignore everything you know about family relations and things from what passes for canon at Latin Hetalia. I MEAN IT. BE WARNED ( Read more... )

fanfiction, chi/peru, tfhol, latin hetalia, br/arg

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vicucha_sc March 11 2013, 00:39:03 UTC
First of all, I'm so used to Tonio being an absent father that it really melts my heart whenever he's depicted all overprotective and "fatherly", if that's the right word. Martin could have been a better brother with Sebby too. God this family gives me so many feels!! Oh and the mustache thing, just trying to imagine it makes me laugh.

Funny how both Martin's and Manuel's lovers are now in danger and therefore both are feeling miserable.

I really liked the details about the night Lu and Martin slept together.

LOL at how hard it is for Martin to admit someone can be better than or as good as Maradona. Honestly I'm one of those argentinians that don't like Maradona that much, cause aside from being a great football player there isn't much to be proud of when it comes to him. I'll always prefer Messi. Still I enjoy whenever Martin's admiration for Maradona is brought up for comedy XD

And finally Lovina desperate to see her babies, being a totally italian mommy haha can't wait till she meets the boys XD

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berseker March 15 2013, 17:21:50 UTC
<3<3

I don't know, I think I enjoy seeing him caring about his babies (and they're so precious, how could he possibly not love them ;o;) and Tincho is... a self-centered baby, that's his main problem. Well, that and the fact that he's a bit insane :3

And yes, they're both unlucky lovers. Tragic, really. Martin looks pretty when he's upset... I mean, what.

And... hehehe, I'm not sure what I think about Maradona. He comes across as really weird, sometimes. But I love Tincho's weird crush on the guy. Messi is cooler, but he doesn't have the crazy factor on his side, think about it. /shot

Lovi will meet them soon, we're almost at the end omg. WHO KNEW THIS DAY WOULD COME

thank you so much for commenting, I love you <3<3<3

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vicucha_sc March 15 2013, 19:02:24 UTC
Me too, I love seeing him like that. "Self-centered" is his middle name, HA!

It's because when he's upset about someone else, he's not being egocentric for once, and that doesn't happen often, so yeah it's cute.

Yeah, Messi is not as crazy and controversial either, besides although Messi keeps a lot of his argentinian customs, the fact is he spent most of his life in Spain and so argentinians can't relate to him easily. That's why Maradona is more popular as the argentinian football idol.

It's my pleasure, love you too <333

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berseker March 17 2013, 05:11:49 UTC
You know, I remember a while ago (heh, more than a year) when Messi had to play against an argentinean team, and he won, and then people were saying he wasn't a real Argentinean and he was so hurt, poor baby. It was cute to see how much he cared about it :3

But no one would say that about Maradona, every. He's, like... incredibly Argentinean :D

or something

♥♥♥

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oxiosa March 13 2013, 02:10:56 UTC
Ffffffffuuuu- of course he’d fall into coma, I should have seen this coming, Jesus Christ, how could you D: Since it seems we already have a character in coma, and siblingscousins falling in love, all we need now to make this a goddamn proper novela is someone faking pregnancy and/or somebody going crazy and murderous…

Mama Lovina is such a fierce mama ;3; And Tinchito was his baby boy too, yeeeesssssss. I’m looking forward to the family reunion (omg Manu has a light idea of what’s going on, he at least knows Antonio is his daddy, but Martín won’t understand a thing, the poor thing, his brain will have such a break down when he finds out, such shocking news in such a sad time).

Sebas is breaking my little heart. ANTONIO DOES LOVE YOU, BABY, IN HIS STRANGE AND SUSPICIOUS WAYS. JUST IGNORE HIS WEIRDNESS AND EMBRACE HIS LOVE ;A;

Lol I won’t get tired of pointing out how María is the most efficient character so far, she gets so much shit done while everybody else is just panicking around :’D Where would we be without her?

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berseker March 15 2013, 17:31:03 UTC
Yeah, things are going bad for Luluzinho :( the sad thing is, since we're almost at the end, there won't be time for fake pregnancies... or for pushing someone down the stairs. This will be a frustration I'll carry in my heart forever.

And yeeees their meeting will be a mess with everyone talking at the same time, and then Tincho will be confused, poor baby. He must be used to it right now. He has the weirdest family ever

and so does Sebi, in a way. Antonio probably made them unable to recognize when something is normal and when something is really really weird...

and heeey Maria is not busy angstying over failed love lifes, that's why she has so much free time to... do stuff. The others need some time to sit down and slide against the wall and cry :3

or something like that, anyway

thank you for commenting, love <3<3<3

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