New SG-1 Fic - Private Universe

[bertybertle]

Title - Private Universe

Comments

[chattycatsmeow]

Oh wow - of all things to take from Daniel and so thoroughly, too! It's a sad lonely life they lead, but at least they have each other and most of them, that's enough.

[bertybertle]

I wondered what would be the one thing, other than his life, that would cause the most distress, and Daniel without language... well, yeah. Sorry about the sad, but thanks for reading!

[nicci_mac]

Holy Hannay - you are right. Bittersweet. Poor Daniel. Poor, poor Daniel. WAAAAHHHH! This hurts. A lot. Becuase words are not adequate, I made you this...

[bertybertle]

Oh my God! That's PERFECT! You know, you just toss these things in here, like it's no big deal, but it means so much to me, Nic. I utterly love it. Thank you.

And thank you for reading the story - I'm glad you 'liked' it! *kisses you inappropriately*

[nicci_mac]

I hoped you would like it. I had a spot of insomnia last night so this was the result. I read the fic and then HAD to make a cover for it. I knew I wanted a book in there, and Daniel looking stricken, and Jack looking happy and reassuring. Giving Daniel long hair again was a bit of a challenge though.

So, in conclusion...

Bring on the Trumpets!

[bertybertle]

Ha HAAAAA! TRUMPETS!

I did do a double take on Daniel's hair - and I saw how clever you'd been in picking that up.

*pins on "Genius" badge*

You're just too damn smart and you never cease to amaze me with your attention to detail.

Hope you get some sleep tonight, Sweetie.

[mornincamper]

::sniffle::
heart-wrenchingly beautiful.
and you've taken Jack POV to a whole new level here. Like he's even more internalized out of necessity. (and yet more focused on communicating with Daniel) A constant 'stream of consciousness' kind of internal dialog.
kudos. ♥

[bertybertle]

Jack is so lovely to write, and this 1st person POV was really interesting to work in. Thank you for reading, and I'm really glad you enjoyed.

[tresa_cho]

O.o; Bittersweet, you got that right. Wow. I was following along quite nicely until I reached the explination of how Daniel can't speak or communicate effectively. Then I broke. Really. I was crushed. :C Poor Daniel. That would be so terrible. At least Jack has always been able to read between the lines. Yeesh. Great, great job on this. Really.

[bertybertle]

I don't know how I think of these terrible things to do to Daniel - I really don't!

Thank you so much for your lovely comments.

[melayneseahawk]

Oh, ouch. Mean Ancients.

[bertybertle]

:-( I know!

And thanks for reading.