Part Two - Nonlinear System

[bertybertle]

Back to Part One.

Comments

[eccentricweft]

Oh... it's hard to find words for this. It's brilliant (the premise, the execution of it) and horrifying (the situation) all at once. It's not surprisingly that John would wrap his life around taking care of Rodney but it's still mindbending to think of going through that uncertainty every day.

Maybe I'll be more coherent about this later, but anyway - wonderful story.

[bertybertle]

Thank you so much. I tried to balance the desperation of the situation with the joy whenever John and Rodney found the same page - I'm so glad you thought it worked. Thanks for letting me know.

[tzzzz]

I really enjoyed that.

[bertybertle]

Cool! Thanks for reading.

[danceswithgary]

You did a wonderful job with this, presenting the daily struggle and tugging my heartstrings all along the way.

[bertybertle]

Thank you very much indeed - I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[rohaa]

Wow, I was wondering for a while where you were going with this and if it'd work, but it really, really does, and by the end, I actually liked that you DIDNT just fix the whole thing. Love how it gradually became easier and more lovable and more adjusted. This is really well written!

[bertybertle]

Gosh! What lovely comments. Thank you so much. And it never actually occurred to me to fix McKay. Does that make me a bad person? *g*

[cleito]

Time-jumping stories are so hard to do well, and you did very well with this. *hearts*

[bertybertle]

TIme-jumping stories hurt my head to read - let alone write. But thank you - I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it.