Comments | berusama: fic arc: Lessons (4/4) (K/S)

berusama

fic arc: Lessons (4/4) (K/S)

Aug 05, 2009 15:52

Title: There's Nothing Like You and I (K/S)
Rating: R
Warnings/Spoilers: Possible abuse of Shakespeare?/none
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters mentioned herein, nor am I making a profit from this work of fiction.
Summary: Jim learns that nothing will keep him and Spock apart for long.

( Spock has always known that he is a singularity. )

star trek

Comments 20

avictoriangirl September 21 2010, 01:03:12 UTC

What a wonderful series of stories. I adore your Jim. And the Shakespeare was an awesome bonus!

berusama September 25 2010, 01:48:10 UTC

thanks so much; i'm glad you enjoyed them! :)

chironstar September 21 2010, 02:32:58 UTC

What an excellent piece of writing - beautiful characterization, wonderful development (I love how you gradually built up all their relationships), delicious tension ... I love how each of the 4 parts read like they were episodes from the series and the Midsummer Night's Dream mission in part 4 had me clapping in fiendish glee! ♥

Your Jim and Spock voice is spot-on - you broke my heart with Jim's insecurities and then warmed it again with Spock and the Enterprise crew's awesomeness. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us! ♥ \o/ ♥

berusama September 25 2010, 01:50:54 UTC

thank you so much for this beautiful comment. i mostly post things so that the plot bunnies will leave me alone, but comments like this are just an added bonus to making my writings public. thank you for your wonderful words!♥!

darlapr0duction September 21 2010, 04:07:00 UTC

I love a happy ending ♥ I really love how you write Jim. He's the perfect Jim in my book. Loved it. And you get an extra cookie from me for the Nyota and Bone's hook-up.

berusama September 25 2010, 01:52:43 UTC

me too! i can't really write any other kind of ending, actually... but i'm glad you liked this version of Jim! thank you for commenting!♥!

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berusama September 25 2010, 01:54:33 UTC

i'm so glad you liked it; thank you, thank you for taking the time to comment! :)

bonniebb September 22 2010, 06:12:15 UTC

I really enjoyed the steady progression in Jim and Spock's relationship. Very nicely done! Thanks so much for sharing. :)

berusama September 25 2010, 01:56:19 UTC

you're welcome :) and thank you for commenting! i'm glad you enjoyed the pacing of their relationship progress because 'steady' was just what i was going for. thanks again!