fic: What Makes You Beautiful (Up All Night, Ziam Edition)

[berusama]

Title: Baby, You Light Up My World
Pairing: Ziam
Rating: R
Warning(s): beard!Danielle
Disclaimer: I cannot and do not own/know/associate with/stalk the real people mentioned herein. The following is a work of fiction. No money was made in its creation.
Summary: Zayn doesn't know he's beautiful fucking hot.
AN: beta'd by ingeneva, who i am now in love with. any

Comments

[love211]

"...and suddenly they are gyrating towards each other. Zayn's gaze zeros in on Liam's hips, which are getting closer and closer."

just imagine if...... HOLY FUCK. ugh bless this freaking fic.

[berusama]

lol, indeed, JUST IMAGINE IF... those are pretty much the exact words that spawned this fic :D thank you for commenting!♥!

[anonymous]

I LOVE THIS FREAKING STORY SOO MUCH!!! This is actually my second time reading it, but yeah. AAMAZAYN. Can you make a second part for it? PLEASE! !! PRETTY PLEAEE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP!!!

[berusama]

wow, thank you so much for this lovely comment! honestly, i hadn't planned on writing a sequel to this, but if it's the characterizations you liked, i've posted a few other fics to my journal, and my zayn and liam characters all tend to be fairly similar, heh. but thank you again for commenting!

[amazinwonderful]

I in love with this story. Really, I read this story two times back. It's amazing, and it's hard coming across good stories. I love it and I really think it will be amazing if you made a second part, if not, it's okay to. Just leaving this is amazing. :) And very, very HAWT!

[berusama]

you know a sequel never really occurred to me, but i'll have to think about it :) thank you for commenting, i'm so glad you liked it!!

[anonymous]

wow i wish i could pin point everything i love about this fic but then i would just be copying and pasting the entire thing hahaha this is absolutely amazing and you're such a good writer. i love how you added things that the boys have mentioned before (like zayn once said he makes fun of himself when hes dancing and doesnt take himself too seriously) and i cant think of the others but you know what im saying ;p this is amazing and i cant wait to read more from you !! WELL DONE !

[berusama]

wow, thank you so much :) i'm glad you liked this! the whole inspiration for this was actually zayn's admissions on how he feels about dancing and his body language on stage when he does dance... i'm glad you picked up on what i was trying to highlight there, lol. and thank you so much for taking the time to comment!♥!

[thetommothrusts]

I just. I just loved this soo much. Ily okay x reaally good :D