You should definitely keep going with this. My favorite comics are the ones about personal experiences because I feel I can relate more to those kinds of stories than the superhero comics my boyfriend enjoys.
your sense of composition is great, graphic novel is totally your medium.
the only thing I can't help but feel is a little off is that the comic is obviously very emotive and self-reflecting, yet some scenes are a little cold.
for instance, the last panel (not to say it was cold, in the very least in fact) I almost wish your character was looking down at the t-shirt, scrunching it a little.
in my opinion (as a reader experiencing the comic) I want to feel like I'm the character too so the panels where we're seeing what you saw, are really nice.
In the end, your drawings are always amazing (almost typed that amaxing)and am forever in awe of your skill.
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My favorite comics are the ones about personal experiences because I feel I can relate more to those kinds of stories than the superhero comics my boyfriend enjoys.
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your sense of composition is great, graphic novel is totally your medium.
the only thing I can't help but feel is a little off is that the comic is obviously very emotive and self-reflecting, yet some scenes are a little cold.
for instance, the last panel (not to say it was cold, in the very least in fact) I almost wish your character was looking down at the t-shirt, scrunching it a little.
in my opinion (as a reader experiencing the comic) I want to feel like I'm the character too so the panels where we're seeing what you saw, are really nice.
In the end, your drawings are always amazing (almost typed that amaxing)and am forever in awe of your skill.
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