Worth the Risk ★/ oneshot.
Pairing: layhan
Rating: pg-13
Word Count: 10,149 words
Summay: It's two years since Yixing met Lu Han for the first time. Two years since Lu Han has slipped out of Yixing's life because Yixing isn't a good person and Yixing doesn't deserve good things. When they're forced to interact, though, it's hard for Yixing to think of anything but happy Lu ( Read more... )
Rating: pg-13
Word Count: 10,149 words
Summay: It's two years since Yixing met Lu Han for the first time. Two years since Lu Han has slipped out of Yixing's life because Yixing isn't a good person and Yixing doesn't deserve good things. When they're forced to interact, though, it's hard for Yixing to think of anything but happy Lu ( Read more... )
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Hihi, wow this is great. I was just amazed (again) at how great your stories are. Yixing's character was
just so amazing and I totally connected with his pushing away of people and wow, another great story!
Just "Did he think them holding hands was just Yixing goofing off? Did he think that when Lu Han touched
him he was just blushing for fun? Did Yixing have to spell it out? Yixing liked Lu Han. A lot. How could
he not know?" Poor baby Xing and my Layhan feels like ;___;
Wonderful!
(ps. this is Kat btw, with a random livejournal name lol!)
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ahhh YOU ARE TOO NICE TO ME OMG thank you soooo much. i'm really glad you liked it and my stories.
yixing was great to write (like, very cathartic) and very connectable for me, too.
thank you!! relationships are so hard already and just yixing is so used to people leaving him and just it's even worse for him and i just POOR BABY OH GOD
thank you againnn. you're the best <3
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Especially the way Yixing was written :) I like how he doesn't get reinvented, he doesn't necessarily change who he is to make it work out, it just falls into place like it should.
The ending felt really natural too. I don't read a lot of fics but most that I do feel really forced, especially at the reconciliation moments at the end, but this was just cute and perfect and just enough to give resolution without being over-the-top. well done!!!! <3
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thank youu. yixing is just ahh. thank you! i'm glad it all kind of felt natural and seemed to flow and work and fall into place as you say. i was worried over the end, feeling like it was probably too little, but i'm so glad to hear it wasn't forced. i didn't want that but i feel like they needed some kind of resolution, haha, so yes, thanks for liking it and all, haha. you're the best <3
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The conflict within their relation/not-relationship is portrayed vaguely, but I like that you did it that way because it makes us readers have to do some guesswork. I like how everything alternates from fluff and angst and the idea of Luhan being something that scares Yixing while Yixing is something that scares Luhan is just so alkfjdal;kjej can i hug it for 5ever? ;u;
And I love dorky Yifan and his tiny role of matchmaker because dorky Yifan is totally dorky and deserves more dorky love /shoT
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the conflict was really hard to work, though, because i didn't want to be too intense or invested or whatever but i didn't want to be too vague??? and it was over 10k and like woah i didn't need to do anything to make it longer, haha. thank you, though. i'm really glad that you liked it i'm surprised i managed to write angst i am so bad at it ahhhhh YES YES HUG IT 5EVER ahhh
YES kris as matchmaker is the best and he is so lame and dorky and totally does deserve some love but HE DOESN'T GET ANY BC THEN I'D HAVE TO ADD ME TO THE FIC AND THAT'S NOT COOL soooooo
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I think that you ended up finding a perfect balance for it though, and it makes the story even better than it already is and I just don't understand how you do it so perfectly??? *sobs* I'm so bad at working things out like that omfg. anD YOUR ANGST ISN'T HORRIBLE AT ALL WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT D;
"THEN I'D HAVE TO ADD ME TO THE FIC AND THAT'S NOT COOL"
LOLOLOLOL
It's okay, we can all love dorky Kris from where we are because dorky Kris is just what makes the world go round
(okay, this is really random, but i didn't realize how similar your icon was to this one until you replied to the comment and wow it looks like kris and sehun are totally twinning pmslpmslpmsl)
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