A Little Bit Rough ★/ oneshot.

Jul 16, 2013 10:11

Pairing: kaisoo
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3,406
Summay: Beaten and bruised, Jongin takes Kyungsoo home and they argue and Kyungsoo is a bad person and Jongin knows it, but he finds himself unable to let go of this boy.
Author's Note: I wanted to write some top!soo and I got this idea after the drama mv - which this kind of takes place after ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, pairing: kaisoo

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eexiee July 16 2013, 20:13:41 UTC
fine i'll spot myself

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eexiee July 16 2013, 20:29:49 UTC
UM I DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY YOU THINK THIS WAS BAD????

Jongin was perfect and beautiful and fucking him up against the wall was only better because of this - because he was completely ruining this younger boy.
Oh yes top!soo <3 <3

His face is cut up and his lip is starting to bleed again. He left eye looks a little swollen and he can see the bruises that are lining across his chest.
Is it bad this makes me wish I could draw? Because I wish I could draw.

He thinks of Jongin - Jongin smirking, Jongin naked, Jongin’s cock, Jongin being fucked up against a wall.
Fanning myself omg.

“Yah! That’s not true. I think we both know Sehun is the worst of us all.”
HAHAHAHA TYPICAL

“You didn’t tell people?”/“I didn’t think you’d want me to.”
KYUNGSOO DO YOU SEE THAT HE IS PERFECT FOR YOU????

And this is good, right?
This is very good.

His eyes land on all of his bruises and cuts. Jongin proceeds to kissing each of them, soft, sweet, and Kyungsoo squirms under the boys touch - some from pain and some from pure want.
AEGHOAIEBFOAIUEYFOAS

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jooniee July 22 2013, 05:20:32 UTC
UMMM I THOUGHT IT WAS BAD BECAUSE IT IS??????

I wish you could draw, too, omg. That would be so cool. SEHUN IS THE ALL AROUND WORST AND EVERYONE KNOWS IT.

Ughhh. I forgive you for the long comment (because I really like them so you don't have to be sorry, haha). THANK YOU. Ugh. I am soooo glad that you like it and I'm glad the characterizations were good. I'm always really worried when it comes to that. So extra thank yous. AND I DO WRITE BAD SMUT UGH GO AWAY BEFORE I HAVE TO WRITE MORE TO PROVE TO YOU HOW BAD IT IS.

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eexiee July 22 2013, 12:04:11 UTC
~*~*~*~*write more*~*~*~*~

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heydaphne July 17 2013, 00:10:36 UTC
ugh omg i really like this i'm probably going to save it so i can read it again later ;; <3
i wouldn't mind this being the second part of the drama mv XD

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jooniee July 22 2013, 05:21:53 UTC
aw, thank you so much! yes, please read again and again so I can feel special <3
i wouldn't mind either!!!! oh god, can you see sm just like "lalalala gonna post some porn on youtube~~~" because i kind of totally can????

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jooniee July 22 2013, 05:22:57 UTC
THANK YOU. bottom!jongin is slowly becoming my favourite thing and it is such a problem ugh. But yes, thank you so much, bb <3

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syupeojunieo July 17 2013, 02:41:26 UTC
OMFG I TRIED TO READ THIS WITH FAMILY AROUND AND IT WAS THE MOST AWKWARD THING EVER

top!soo is really attractive omg yes i approve more top!soo pls because this is really hot. everyone always makes jongin out to be some mysterious manwhore and i'm actually super happy that he's the more innocent of the two. and the way you wrote them is just a;skldfj;lj the characterization is absolutely perfect because you captured how conflicted kyungsoo is and how he takes pleasure from corrupting jongin but at the same time he wants him to go because he's got a way out and their relationship is dysfunctional but it works in all the right places and this is just really great


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jooniee July 22 2013, 05:25:38 UTC
WHY WOULD YOU TRY DOING THAT OMG???? (but oh wait, i've done that before and i've also written stuff with family around so i really shouldn't talk.)

yessss. i love me some top!soo a lot (and bottom!jongin so it just kind of works out well). thank you! a change of pace is always nice, i think (although i do enjoy mysterious!jongin as well). you are so sweet omg. i always soooo worried about characterization so it means a lot that you think it's good. and that you just like it all around ahhhh <3

YOU ARE THE BEST BUT ALSO THE WORST BECAUSE I ALWAYS STARE AT THAT GIF FOR TEN MINUTES EACH TIME I COME HERE

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meryisintheair July 17 2013, 19:13:30 UTC
I've been so overwhelmed by all the fics about the drama version lately but this, this is definitely one of the best :D

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jooniee July 22 2013, 05:26:19 UTC
Thank you so much! After watching the drama I knew I had to write something and I'd been wanting some top!soo... I'm really glad people have enjoyed it~

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meryisintheair July 22 2013, 22:10:13 UTC
You're Welcome :D After watching it I knew someone had to write something for me to read xDD

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jooniee July 23 2013, 04:49:51 UTC
haha, well I'm glad that I was able to fulfill this role for you~~

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