Fic for scarletladyy

Dec 03, 2009 08:33

For: scarletladyy
From: gala_apples
Title: Everything More Than Everything Else
Rating: R
Summary: "Hate is a great burden to bear. It injures the hater more than the hated." Coretta Scott King
Disclaimer: This is a work of fanfiction set in the Harry Potter universe - all recognisable characters and settings are the property of J. K. Rowling and her associates. No ( Read more... )

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star54kar December 3 2009, 14:06:32 UTC
This is positively chilling!

I think you did a wonderful job of handling this difficult subject matter and making it believable.

Great work:)

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wolfiekins December 3 2009, 15:36:49 UTC
Of the myriad ways that Ron and Harry can come together after canon, this situation is quite plausible, yet rarely reflected upon. Or handled so well. Ron's feelings of powerlessness and detachment are nearly tangible. Brilliantly done.

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snarry_fan7 December 4 2009, 02:33:39 UTC
Very well written. I like how it's from Ron's point of view and the emotions he experiences are so powerful. Well done.~Sophia

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scarletladyy December 4 2009, 03:49:47 UTC
Wow, I loved this. It was so beautiful - the way that they come together. So beautifully fucked up, and that's what I liked most about it.

It's certainly something I can see happening, and the way you wrote it was brilliant.

Thank you so much for this :)

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plotbunniofdoom December 4 2009, 03:54:24 UTC
Oh. Oh, this is very powerful.

I don't think I've read a dark take on H/R before but I really enjoyed this.

Part of me was hoping for a happy ending. But I guess it wouldn't hold with the feel of the rest of the piece.

I love your Ron voice and how they know how wrong what they're doing is, but carry on anyway.

Great writing! :)

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