Fic for slantedknitting

Dec 04, 2009 20:17

For: slantedknitting
From: SLU64
Title: The Sum of All Parts
Rating: R and over
Summary: Harry lingers over memories as his body lingers over Ron.
Disclaimer: I do not own any part of the Harry Potter World created by JKR and make no money from writing this.
Warnings: Oral, rimming, anal
Author's Note: This is my first attempt at an exchange and I hope I fulfilled all ( Read more... )

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hpuckle December 5 2009, 02:00:26 UTC
*sigh*

Oh, I love this. It's a beautiful mix of domestic, established stuff witht he whole discovery and nerves of the first time too. I really enjoyed seeing the little snippets of the build up to their relationship. This was really beautiful.

xxx

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wolfiekins December 5 2009, 02:13:20 UTC
Such a tremendously involving and intimate inspection of the boys' relationship. So succulent, bare and honest.
Wonderful, wonderful work!

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slantedknitting December 5 2009, 07:27:28 UTC
Yayayay! Oh, yay. I loved it! Thank you so much. It was very beautiful, seeing how their whole relationship developed. They're perfect for each other.

And the sex was awesome, too. I love the jokes about the achey knees. And I loved, loved, loved the handjob scene on the couch. Especially this line: "he buried his face into the Ron scented shoulder underneath him." Damn adorable.

Thank you so much, mystery elf. This was a really, really wonderful gift. I loved the bits of their previous friendship carrying over to their relationship - the protectiveness, the joking around, the supportiveness, the ability to read each others' moods, etc. Oh, and I loved the line about "Harry struggled every day for enough confidence to touch Ron casually outside of sex." Oh, Harry! Oh, Ron! *blubs for days*

Anyway, yes, this was amazing and endless thanks!! :D

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slu64 December 29 2009, 19:47:50 UTC
Glad you liked it - this was my first fest and wasn't sure if I was getting everything in I needed. Glad you liked it. ;-)

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fordanglia December 5 2009, 08:15:24 UTC
This was way too wonderful for words.

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nolagal December 5 2009, 16:06:01 UTC
I love all the glimpses into their relationship! Fabulous!

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