Fic for slantedknitting

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For: slantedknitting
From: SLU64
Title: The Sum of All Parts
Rating: R and over
Summary: Harry lingers over memories as his body lingers over Ron.
Disclaimer: I do not own any part of the Harry Potter World created by JKR and make no money from writing this.
Warnings: Oral, rimming, anal
Author's Note: This is my first attempt at an exchange and I hope I fulfilled all

Comments

[abigail89]

Very nice!

[esporamor]

Oh this was just perfect.
I like very much how you took us to all the developments of their relationship from the physical to the feelings.
Perfect.

[maevemist]

I love what you have done with this piece, weaving the old and the new, adding in an actual plot but not skimping on the deliousness that is Harry and Ron together.

Ther are so many wonderful moments I could mention but the one that struck me the hardest was this.
The familiar arms encircled Harry, pulling him back against the warm body behind him. He didn’t remember the love of his mother’s embrace, but he knew in his gut that if it had made him feel half as good as these arms made him feel he had been truly blessed.
This sent shivers down my spine as it so sad and beautiful all at the same time.

[anonymous]

That was wonderful. So loving and emotional yet so them. Very well written! And some smoking hot sex scenes.

[plotbunniofdoom]

Er, that was me! Was commenting from my blackberry.

And I forgot to mention the tattoo! I just loved that! :)

[starlollie]

lovely.