fic for shocolate Part 2

Dec 16, 2009 00:21

For: shocolate
From: Star54kar
Title: Ritus ab Sanatio Adamo: The Rite of Healing Love (Part 2)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: When he had finally recognized his feelings for what they were, Harry had vowed that he would never tell anyone. It was a secret he had every intention of taking to his grave. Now, however, in light of the situation, Harry no longer had that ( Read more... )

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phyrablaze December 16 2009, 11:23:58 UTC
hot damn.
that was awesome.
better comment later, when it's not 5:30am the night before two finals? yes.

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star54kar January 8 2010, 18:02:33 UTC
Thank you:)

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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knic26 December 16 2009, 11:49:23 UTC
Very nice! This was sweet and teh smex was hawt the ritual was inspired!

"Your wife is definitively the most surprisingly understanding individual on the face of this planet." This has to be one of the most true statements in fic in the history of ever!

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star54kar January 8 2010, 18:04:49 UTC
...the ritual was inspired!

It most certainly was inspired...by you!

This has to be one of the most true statements in fic in the history of ever!

*giggles with agreement*

Thank you, love. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it:)

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chiralove December 16 2009, 14:04:32 UTC
Awwww, this is lovely! <3

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star54kar January 8 2010, 18:05:20 UTC
Thank you:)

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shocolate December 16 2009, 14:21:09 UTC
A huge epilogue compliant Harry/Ron???

Oooh, I have been good, this year!

Time stood still as Harry sat by his best mate's bedside, clutching at his hand.

*sigh*

"Yes it is, Hermione. That curse was meant for me. It should have been me!"

I don't know how they've put up with him for thirty years!

They watched Ron sleep in companionable silence until suddenly Ron's eyes flew open as he called out, "Harry!"

Oh - lookit his first word!

Harry felt his tension melt away at the sight of that smile and walked over to sit on the foot of Ron's bed.

Gosh, me too - I literally sagged!

It was apparently designed not to injure your person or damage your mental capabilities, but to attach itself directly to your magical core.

Ooooh - plot!

"But nothing," Ron insisted. "You're not the one who cursed me. I stepped in front of that curse because I wanted to protect you. I chose to protect you. I would do it again in an instant. I know you would do the same for me, and if you insist on continuing to blame yourself, so help me, Harry, I will ( ... )

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shocolate December 16 2009, 14:21:34 UTC
my comment was too long....

Ron finally raised his eyes and for the first time in nearly thirty-three years of friendship, Harry could not read the expression that he saw there. "I want to," Ron said quietly. "If you still want to, then I want to."

Oh! He wants to.

And they're 43? My gods, they're gorgeous when they're 43...

"Alright then," Ron said before he dropped abruptly to his knees.

Man of action!

And the last thing he saw before sleep claimed him was the look of pure joy on Ron's face as a beam of light erupted from the tip of his wand, glowing clear and bright and strong.

*is grinning like a Ron who just gave his first blow job*

When Ron nodded, Harry slowly unfastened the button, lowered the zipper and slowly eased the denims down over his skinny hips until they pooled about his knees.

oooh - canon!skinny!Ron!!

Then working his way back up, he gently spread Ron's cheeks apart with his hands and lowered his head down to lap gently around the circumference of his puckered hole.

Hurrah for rimming and geometry!

The ( ... )

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star54kar January 8 2010, 18:41:52 UTC
I cannot tell you enough how happy I am that you enjoyed this piece ( ... )

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shocolate January 8 2010, 21:20:06 UTC
I have not seen a more convincing epilogue compliant fic.

extreme angst is torture and unhappy endings and death... you had Harry curl up and cry for couple of days... that was fine!! Especially as Ron knew he wanted him.

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