The Ghost Monument REVISED

Nov 09, 2018 18:10

Title: The Ghost Monument REVISED ( Read more... )

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chamilet November 26 2018, 21:49:37 UTC
ETA: that was me, stupid computer logged me out.

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chamilet November 26 2018, 21:50:47 UTC
If you can even see what I posted. Who knows. Luckily I copied it when I refreshed:

I re-watched this episode yesterday. I don't really think I like the changes you made, particularly to the end. I like the more vulnerable Doctor, not quite as sure of herself after her past self got so many of her companions (read: all of them) killed.

I can't decide if I like the little bit you added about Epso's mum taking care of him or not. I'd like to re-watch the episode again while reading this, I think, to see where you reassigned dialog.

I do think you helped me decipher a few lines, though:)

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