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betelin_notecor

His First Kiss

Jul 17, 2008 22:24

Just a short drabblet I had sitting on my computer!

Title: His First Kiss
Rating: G
Pairing: AS/S
Words: ~650
Summary: It was not his real first kiss, but it was the only one that counted.
A/N: This is a little "Thank You!" for bryoneybrynn because she helped me out with something I needed betaed. I'm not sure the grammar is any good, because it feels ( Read more... )

ship: albus severus/scorpius, character: albus severus, fanfiction: one-shot, character: scorpius, rating: g

Comments 31

fodirteg July 18 2008, 02:41:02 UTC

Very cute! Poor Albus, stuck with all those non-countable first kisses. He must take after his dad, what with disappointing "trial runs."

(btw ... Finch-Fletchley-Parkinson made me giggle out loud!)

betelin_notecor July 18 2008, 02:53:01 UTC

Wow! You're quick on the draw!

I'm glad you liked it! <3 And I've always wondered what one does if you have a dash in your name. Go to the wife's name? Pass it down with the dash? Add the wife's name? I decided to add the Parkinson because it was too good to pass up. XD

Also, OT, I've gotten 5,000 of 25,000 words written on your story! Yay! One-fifth done! :)

fodirteg July 18 2008, 02:55:26 UTC

eeee! More reason for teh Happy!

sleepingfingers July 18 2008, 02:47:55 UTC

Oh! That's so, so sweet and cute and it's reduced me to a puddle of goo-mess. I love how Al adamantly insists that they don't count (I agree with him about Rose's kiss, since for me, family members don't count, but all the others!). :D :D

This is so much love. ♥

betelin_notecor July 18 2008, 02:56:57 UTC

No, Rose doesn't count for me either, but when I was little I thought kissing my cousin counted, so...

And I got the idea from myself because I adamantly believe that I haven't been kissed yet, even though I kissed a guy in spin the bottle once and I kissed a boy in third grade (I liked him and he said he'd kiss me if I gave him a Goldfish cracker, so I did and he did), because they weren't "the one."

I'll probably wait until I meet the guy I marry to have that official "first kiss." XD

sleepingfingers July 18 2008, 04:18:49 UTC

I grew up in Vietnam, and over there, even kissing on the cheeks in greeting is strange, unless you're really, really little--but when I came over here, my relatives were a bit different (Americanized, you could say). But yeah.

That's cute! I've never been kissed on the lips by somebody who isn't my relative, but I agree with you (and Al): unless it's by "the one," it doesn't count.

slug_belcher July 18 2008, 03:53:26 UTC

Aw! That was soooooo sweet! I loved it!

betelin_notecor July 18 2008, 03:54:02 UTC

<3 Thank you for reading! So glad you liked it!

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betelin_notecor July 18 2008, 04:11:18 UTC

<3 Thankies!

allowedtobesad July 18 2008, 05:41:42 UTC

Aw, that was really adorable. <3

betelin_notecor July 18 2008, 05:42:43 UTC

Thank you! <3