Fic: Destiny

Aug 23, 2008 14:20

Happy birthday to introject! In honor of your birthday I wrote you a ficlet! :)

It's just something I had sitting partially done on my computer, so I rushed to complete it today. It is inspired by your pic HERE. I hope you like it! :)

(I think it sucks. =/ I tried a new style and I don't like it. XD)

Title: Destiny
Rating: PG
Ship: AS/S
Summary: What's ( Read more... )

ship: albus severus/scorpius, character: albus severus, rating: pg, fanfiction: one-shot, character: scorpius

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betelin_notecor August 24 2008, 00:14:05 UTC
It was just a very blank style without much in the way of description. Basically I just told the story. XD I much prefer to detail feelings and reactions and things. This style feels very "drabble"-ish to me.

And thank you! ♥ You should know better than to read death-fic. XD I avoid it at all costs. XD

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betelin_notecor August 24 2008, 00:18:17 UTC
nope, I went over to my inbox this morning, saw it was clogged with random junk, hit "delete all"...

and realized I'd deleted your message. XD

And don't get me wrong, I like to read bare-bones stories... I just don't like to write them. They feel incomplete from my writers perspective.

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p01s0n3d August 24 2008, 00:09:44 UTC
It's cute, very sweet. I love your interpretation of the red-string story (myth? legend?); it's different from what I've read before.

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betelin_notecor August 24 2008, 00:15:51 UTC
I don't know a lot about the red-string of destiny beyond what I've seen in random manga. XD So that's why it's different. I just wanted to use the string somehow, so I fudged it up. XD

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p01s0n3d August 24 2008, 00:20:51 UTC
It's a bit over-used, but at least you created your own story for it. You did an awesome job.

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betelin_notecor August 24 2008, 00:21:14 UTC
*hugs* Thanks! :)

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introject August 24 2008, 00:53:20 UTC
Fff, this was adorable! ♥ I really quite like this style; it's simple and works really well for the story line. *_* Thank you so much ♥♥♥~ :DDD

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betelin_notecor August 24 2008, 00:55:19 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you liked it! ♥

I still don't like the minimalist style, but I'm happy as long as you enjoyed it. :)

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