Painful Silence - Chapter 3

[betelin_notecor]

Title : Painful Silence
Chapter: 3/5
Chapter Rating : G
Overall Rating: PG-13
Word Count : ~4,500
Characters : Albus/Scorpius
Disclaimer : Just playing... I'll give them back to JKR when I'm done!

Summary : Al's always been a bit shy, but he's never been afraid to talk to people. That is, he wasn't until Scorpius showed up. Now Al wonders if he'll ever be

Comments

[phoenix_xd]

mmk, good. topaz is gone.
i felt so bad for scorpius.. :[

i can't wait for the next chapter!
:D:D

[betelin_notecor]

lol, I had to get rid of Topaz. I couldn't take more than a chapter of her. XDD

*pets Scorpius* Don't worry things will get better for him!

And I hope I get the next chapter done soon, though it might take a few weeks. =/

[betelin_notecor]

XD I vote for screw the girl! Too bad it takes so long for people to deal with their sexuality....

They're fourth year students. I tried to mention that a couple of times when I introduced Topaz, but it still didn't come across well. It's not a big deal though, as long as people realize they aren't first years anymore.

And I was surprised that I managed to get this out so quickly. I just managed to hammer it out when my parents drove me back up to school yesterday. The words came flowing out and I went yipee! XD

[betelin_notecor]

XD No, she's def. a fourth year. In fact, she rode in the boat across the lake with Al, Scorp, and Rose back in chapter one. It is a bit confusing though.

I doubt it... my writing is not going very smoothly at all. =/

[p01s0n3d]

Topaz is irritating. Thank god he broke up with her.

This story is so awesome and I can't wait to read more!

[betelin_notecor]

Topaz isn't too bad... she just likes to be in-control. She thought she had that with Al, the boy who could not speak, but then he showed he has a brain of his own and she got fried. XD I am glad to see her go though. XD

I can't wait to write more, though I won't get the next chapter done for AT LEAST another two weeks. =/

[p01s0n3d]

To me, that is irritating - I wouldn't have lasted a day around her.

That sucks. I hope you find time soon..

[betelin_notecor]

*hugs* I hope I find time too. :)

[nolagal]

Poor Scorpius, watching Albus go for a girl who looks like him. It's great to see Albus so much better too! Great chapter!

[betelin_notecor]

Yup, Scorpius was very upset by Al's crush on a girl!him. XD But she's gone now and "all is well." XDD

Thank you! :)

[slug_belcher]

Yay! I was so glad to see this updated! Albus and Scorpius are so utterly adorable in this story! Awesome job and I can't wait for the next update!

[betelin_notecor]

I was so glad to get it updated! XD I've been a bit blocked lately and this story is bearing the brunt of that. =/

Thank you! ♥ I hope to have the next chapter up in a few weeks. :)