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p01s0n3d September 8 2008, 02:50:53 UTC
Lily's so sweet - one of those characters that just really needs a hug, yanno?

I actually really like the contrast between Ginny/Harry and Herm/Ron that Lily sees with her mind.

Poor Lilly!

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betelin_notecor September 8 2008, 02:53:40 UTC
I feel so bad for Lily. This is the bio that depresses me the most, even more than Scorpius.

I'm glad that contrast works well. I wanted to explore both couple's dynamics in a post-dh setting, and it just happened to fit well in Lily's bio.

Thank you for commenting! :)

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p01s0n3d September 8 2008, 03:37:42 UTC
I think this one could be more depressing because it's easier to connect to. Like you could easily see parents fighting one way or another, but it's really hard to place yourself in Scorpius' situation unless you, yourself have ever been in that exact same place - Does that make sense?

The couple dynamics are almost what you wouldn't expect since in the books since Ron/Herm were always fighting and Harry/Ginny were the golden couple. I'm not saying it's a bad thing that you switched it up - just unique ^_^

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betelin_notecor September 8 2008, 03:44:41 UTC
I dunno. Maybe it's just because I know what happens AFTER the bios that makes Lily's more depressing to me? XD

I think Ron/Hermione will get along better because they KNEW each other going into a relationship. H/G kind of idolized each other, so they would expect perfection from one another, and when they didn't get perfection it would crush the marriage. Just my take though! :)

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betelin_notecor September 8 2008, 03:23:15 UTC
I dunno. For me, no matter how much I fight with my family, I will always love them. I think Harry and Ginny really do love their kids, as do all of the parents besides Scorpius's, so I try to show that they have that love even when they aren't happy.

Two more: Hugo and Lorcan&Lysander. Then I'm hoping to start posting my epic in January. (OMG so far away. T-T) But I need to get all of my "required" fics done before I even think about writing my epic (because when I start that I know I won't be able to start writing until all seven books are done.)

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betelin_notecor September 8 2008, 21:24:02 UTC
I hate when my parents fight. They don't do it very often, but when they do, I always run to my room and cry. I hate tension! X(

Yeah, they share their bio. It was hard to write a bio for two 1 year old babies, let alone one! I don't like their bio much, but I had to write it.

I love snow. Needless to say, I don't see it in Florida, but I like when I go north in the winter and see it. :)

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betelin_notecor September 8 2008, 15:32:23 UTC
Really? You got a sense of her? Because even I don't have a sense of "her"! XDD

Seriously though. I'm not sure what her personality is going to be when I finally have her really show up in the books. I love bitchy!Lily, and peppy!Lily, and any kind of strong-personality!Lily, but this Lily just wants to please people...

I dunno. She has a personality, but it's just so different from how everyone else makes her out to be. I guess you could say that about all of the characters in my epic though. Ugh. Stupid brain. Why did it have to make them all different?!?

I'm so freaked out by what people are going to think about the characters and if I'll be able to portray them properly. I'm not at all worried about my plot though. (That says something about me as an author, I guess.) I'm just afraid my characterization will be awful.

lol, I'm also blabbering. This is what happens when I'm trapped in a classroom where I can't talk for three straight hours. I start babbling to anyone. XDD

*hugs* Thank you for commenting. (And I love you too! ♥

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betelin_notecor September 8 2008, 21:26:02 UTC
I know I shouldn't worry. It's just hard when my stuff is SO much different from everyone else's stuff. I can't see them acting any other way though. *shrugs* As long as I don't let my characters get out of "their" character, I won't worry.

Now to get back to writing! (My to do list always makes me sob...)

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