Painful Silence - Chapter 5

[betelin_notecor]

Title : Painful Silence
Chapter: 5/5
Chapter Rating : PG-13
Overall Rating: PG-13
Word Count : ~3,000
Characters : Albus/Scorpius
Disclaimer : Just playing... I'll give them back to JKR when I'm done!

Summary : Al's always been a bit shy, but he's never been afraid to talk to people. That is, he wasn't until Scorpius showed up. Now Al wonders if

Comments

[betelin_notecor]

*hugs* Thanks, love! I'm really glad you liked it. I was a bit iffy on the Scorpius/Bole bit, but no one seems to have minded it too much. XD

[slug_belcher]

I absolutely loved it! Now one of my favorites! I loved the last chapter with Al regressing. I could really feel his emotions! Great job!

[betelin_notecor]

Thank you! I'm glad that you said you could feel his emotions. That's what I aim for most in writing is getting emotions across. :)

*hugs* I'm glad you liked it!

[wicked_hpnerd]

Aww! I loved this fic! I really liked Chapter 4 with Al finding everything out. The ending was so sweet ^_^

[betelin_notecor]

Thank you! Chapter 4 was hard to write because I wasn't sure how the Scorpius/Bole angle would come across. I'm glad it seemed to work!

[nolagal]

Poor Al regressing and having to know Scorpius was with that jerk. But Scorpius was so sweet trying to get him to talk again. I love that Albus told his wand, a cactus, and Professor Flitwick that he loved them!
Finally they got together and they both admitted their feelings, so happy and sweet. Fabulous!

[betelin_notecor]

*pets Al* He really is rather pathetic. XD Wands, cacti, and professors need love too! XDDD

*hugs* Thank you!

[beatnikspinster]

This was really sweet! Loved your Albus. I really enjoyed it! :)

[betelin_notecor]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! =D