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betelin_notecor

A Higher Law - Part I-B

Oct 23, 2008 00:15

character: lily ii, ship: albus severus/scorpius, character: albus severus, fanfiction: long-shot, character: scorpius, character: harry, character: severus, character: draco, rating: pg-13, series: a higher law, fanfiction: complete

Comments 4

supergreak October 23 2008, 07:16:26 UTC

I love this, but there's one little typo: Ron never understood his wife's need to use Muggle epitaphs when under pressure

An epitaph is a gravestone engraving, honoring the deceased.
An epithet, on the other hand, among many meanings, can also be a swear word.

betelin_notecor October 23 2008, 11:43:43 UTC

Oh! Thank you! I'll go fix it!

Three betas plus me, and not one of us caught that. XDDD

(My vocab and spelling are screwy... =P)

koreofmyth January 9 2009, 21:43:22 UTC

AGH! Poor Al - I really hope they find him soon...but is it really Goyle? I thought Malfoy enacted the kidnapping...or are they in it together? I'm off to read more!

betelin_notecor January 9 2009, 23:20:52 UTC

Bwahahahahaha! You'll just have to wait and see what happens. =P

Twists and turns abound ahead! XDD