Love What is Mortal

[betelin_notecor]

Love What is Mortal
R-rated, H/R/Hr, H/D, angst, romance, 11,000 words

What would have happened if Harry, Ron, and Hermione had spend the nights in the tent doing something besides sleeping?

A/N: This fic was "purchased" by lies_d through livelongnmarry. The plot was all hers, and I merely wrote it down and embellished it. Huge thank yous go to her for making this

Comments

[nolagal]

You broke my heart. Fix it now! Harry needing so much more than they could give but Hermione and Ron not working together either. Finding them together without him. Draco.
Wonderful and sad. Even with the hopeful ending, it was too late for me, I was broken.

So Ron dumps lavender and dates Harry and they live happily ever after??? NO?

[betelin_notecor]

XDD *hands you duct tape for your heart*

Sorry love! The plot was all the buyer's idea, so I cannot be blamed for the utter angst of it. =P

And think of how sad poor Vi would be if her Daddy ran away with Harry... he's stuck with Lavender, I'm afraid, if only for Vi's sake. ;)

[nolagal]

Harry would be a fabulous second dad, she would have 3 parents instead of just 2, *gives you large puppy dog eyes*

[betelin_notecor]

*snorts* Not gonna happen. Sorry, love.

*pets*

[sleepingfingers]

I like how you made the story very much compliant with canon (which I had thought would be completely impossible). Maybe it's just my prejudice (yes, most definitely), but I like the ending--the three of them together won't work, but they still have each other and their respective lovers.

[betelin_notecor]

XD I personally like the ending... I just cannot see a threesome working in modern society, especially between the three of them (what with Ron's epic jealousy!)

Thanks for reading it! I'm glad you liked it even though it was a squicky trio fic. =P

[maevemist]

This is wonderful. It is very believable, the emmotion is so strong from start to finish that I felt every bit of it.

I agree with you that a threesome wouldn't work in the long term, probably because I was raised in an 'even' household and was never allowed to have an odd number of friends over and what not because it meant someone was always left out, no matter how hard everyone tries to include 'the spare'. (is that not the longest, grammatically incorrect sentence you have ever read?)

I really liked this story. You did a great job thank you so much for sharing it with all of us. The person who bought it is very lucky indeed.

[betelin_notecor]

*hugs* Thank you! ♥

That's an interesting rule, but it makes a lot of sense... I was often the "odd one out" and it was a lonely state of existence. =P (As for whether the question is really that horrible... I just finished studying for an exam and my brain is so blitzed I can barely type myself... I've had to fix a ton of typos just in this comment. XD)

[betelin_notecor]

>.< I tried my best! I'm glad it was up to par for you! :)

I did enjoy working with it, and it was a challenge that taught me a lot about myself and my writing. The love scene was hard to balance, as was working in all of the canon events. I think I spent more time on Part I than the entire rest of the fic!

I loved writing Hermione as a curser... she was always such a nag as a teenager, but I can see her devolving into cussing as she ages and deals with the stress at work. =P

*hugs* Thank you for giving me the opportunity to work on this fic, and I'm sorry I had to get an extension on it, but I'm glad I did--rushing it would have ruined it. :)

[monique_27]

*sigh* It hurts. Oh, Life. You are evil.

Very nicely written. :)

[betelin_notecor]

*pets* Sorry! And life is indeed evil. =P

Thank you! ♥