Natural

[betelin_notecor]

Title: Natural
Word count: ~5,500
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance
Ship: Teddy/James
Beta(s): tiger_flame
A/N: This is written for maevemist as a prize that she won for taking part in the ass_carnival . It's based on prompts she gave me, but I'm afraid the fic is a little tamer than you were looking for Maeve! It barely squeaks into the PG-13 category. XD I hope you like it anyway! :)

Comments

[nolagal]

The story was perfect, fabulous, amazing, and all that good stuff but I just can't believe harry my harry would reject family like that so I am still so sad after reading this even though the ending was happy and sweet.
As always, your writing was fantastic, the characters and their emotions were so vivid.

[betelin_notecor]

I didn't want to write mean!Harry either, but Maeve requested it, so I did.

It made me cry. T_T

Thank you. =) I really don't like this fic (it's not my best writing... I've been working hard to put more character introspection into my writing, but Teddy did not want to think about things. Urg. Brat) but I'm glad some people like it. =P

[rules_of_jinx]

i think it's wonderful! :) there were good moments of being inside Teddy's head. i've decided i love fics where they're all like "oh of course i don't love him." and then of course they do.

i also like how this isn't the normal, oh you're gay and everyone is ok with it story. the angst is good stuff. :) i really enjoyed it.

[betelin_notecor]

Thank you for your kind words, but I'm afraid nothing will change my mind. =P It's just not one of my favorite fics.

And I do hate fics where everyone is completely fine with homosexuality, but it makes me sad when I write families rejecting people because of it. =/

I'm glad you liked it though! *hugs*

[sleepingfingers]

Oh this was so awesomely awesome and brilliant and oh James and Teddy and I am a bit incoherent, sorry. ♥

('Cept I want to kill Harry, but still! It was awesome!)

[betelin_notecor]

UGH. I'm glad you like it, because I don't. XD It needs work, but I don't have time and that makes me SAD. T_T

And Harry is a brat. I wanna kick him. =P

*hugs*

[broken_stone]

Oh, boys! Also, figgy pudding! This is fantastic.

[betelin_notecor]

XD The figgy pudding was fun! I'm like, what can I make James explode onto Teddy's face? Well... it's Christmas time in England... huh... um... oh! FIGGY PUDDING! YAY! XDDD

Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

[maevemist]

I am kind of lost for words right now because it has everything I asked for and so much more. I am going to read it again before I can gush properly later but I wanted you to know that I have read it and you did a wonderful job.

*hugs*

Thank you so very much for this.

[tiger_flame]

Didn't I tell you it was amazing?!?!

[maevemist]

yes you did but was there ever any doubt that it would be anything less than brilliant?

[betelin_notecor]

XD

You two make me blush! =)

[p01s0n3d]

Yay! Happy story! (I am apologizing for all incoherency now). I think I melted in a puddle with the awwwww feeling of this. Very sweet, fluffy, cute and awesome! I think I loved James little 'sit down and think about it' moment'. It brought it to life a little bit more.

[betelin_notecor]

XD My first Teddy/James ended with them going right to sex and I got a lot of comments that the ending was rushed, so I tried to slow it down a bit with the talk. I'm glad it worked. I thought it was kind of dorky. XD

*hugs*

[p01s0n3d]

It is kinda dorky, but that's what makes it cute.