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betelin_notecor

A Curse in Disguise

May 28, 2008 20:06

Title: A Curse in Disguise
Rating: Teen
Genre: Angst
Words: ~850
Warnings: Mpreg
Summary: Al hated sex because of what came afterwards.

Al hated having sex. Well, he didn't hate having sex--that was all well and good. It was the moments right after sex he hated. He was never sure whether to cuddle or push his partner away or simply fall asleep where he ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, ship: albus severus/scorpius, character: albus severus, fanfiction: one-shot, character: scorpius

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betelin_notecor May 29 2008, 01:16:52 UTC

Every once in a while I get this insane urge to write angst. Really angsty angst. And Scorpius is too much of a nervous nelly to be mean. Thus Scorpius tends to become a terrible horrible person. Simply because I like to see Al cry. XD

Glad you liked!

fauxpersonae007 May 29 2008, 01:05:45 UTC

That was so depressing. Scorpius is an ass. It was well written though. I need AS/S fluff A.S.A.P. Is there any chance you'll write a sequel where Scorpius realizes he was wrong and actually loves Al?

betelin_notecor May 29 2008, 01:19:54 UTC

XD I should probably put on a warning for being depressing...

A sequel is probably never going to happen as I got to the end there and was like, well, what the hell do I add? ><

Maybe once I finish my the_ass_fest pinch hit I'll try to write something...

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betelin_notecor May 29 2008, 05:05:38 UTC

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it.

Scorpius can be a bastard. And I really, really hate deadbeat dads. I think they should be locked up in jail and forced to work to make enough money for child support. Maybe some of them would finally realize that you can't go stick your dick in holes willy-nilly and not think about the possible consequences.

*climbs off of soap box*

_beetle_ May 29 2008, 02:29:59 UTC

Al should have expected it; he had always hated what came after sex. The baby was simply no different.

That broken, bloody thing on the floor? Oh, that's just MY HEART!

Please make it all better?

betelin_notecor May 29 2008, 05:02:05 UTC

I'm sorry! *picks it up and shoves it back in, seals up the hole with duct tape* Better?

(Thanks for reading!)

weirdsister1603 May 29 2008, 03:01:01 UTC

I like this. It's definatley not something I've read fifty million times. An angsty twist on the typical m-preg story. And it is really well written. Bravo.

betelin_notecor May 29 2008, 05:01:02 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! Just something odd that popped into my head when I was feeling just a bit emo. XD