The Broken - Table of Contents

[betelin_notecor]

The Broken

Baron Remus J. Lupin, Lord Shrieking has lived a difficult life. He guards his secrets zealously, but when he stumbles upon an equally secretive violinist named Severus Snape, he begins to wonder if he's found someone to share his secrets with.

A novella set in 1876, England, in which mystery abounds, secrets are shocking, and two men

Comments

[nolagal]

Why am I so excited for Snupin??
Oh, that's right, because you wrote it!

I am going to read this tonight!! Can't wait!

[betelin_notecor]

XD *hugs you* You are too sweet!

[aldehyde]

omg! you wrote RENAISSANCE style fic?! that involves remus lupin in some shape or form?! i'm tempted to read this even though it's snupin b/c

a) you wrote it
b) it's LONG!
c) it has my lovely remus
d) renaissance!

[betelin_notecor]

lol, it's victorian actually. And the Snupin drove me bonkers, but I quite like it. XD

I'd be flattered if you did read it, but I understand if you don't. I wouldn't read Snupin if it were my choice. XD

(Sirius has a minor part too though! I gave him a bit of a different background to reflect on what he might have become if he hadn't run away from home and if he hadn't had the hope of one day escaping prison and throttling Peter. XD He's kinda depressing. >.>)

[sleepingfingers]

:D :D

Can't wait to for the Japanese oral to be over so I can savour this without feeling guilty and distracted!

[betelin_notecor]

*hugs* GO STUDY! NOW!

I don't want to be the cause of your failing. =P

[sleepingfingers]

:P Haha, I will, I will! As soon as I get back from work, that is. =/

*dreads going*

[betelin_notecor]

Aww. *pets* Maybe it'll be a nice boring or busy day? (depending on which you prefer... lol)

[parseltonguepen]

I just finished reading, and EEEE! I love love love it!!! :D It's totally everything I hoped! Pansy and Percy and Slughorn fit in perfectly - and Sirius was detestable, as I find the Canon Sirius to be, so that fit perfectly too XD

[betelin_notecor]

lol! I'm so glad you liked it! It was hard writing the Snupin, really, really hard, since I don't back the pairing, and I'm afraid it shows a bit in the amount of time I spend on them

[p01s0n3d]

DARN YOU FOR POSTING THIS RIGHT BEFORE JAPANESE FINAL! >_< *Shakes fist* I will come back and read this later, because it looks awesome and I want to read.... I just want an A in Japanese more :D

[betelin_notecor]

Everyone has been saying this. December is a bad month for posting. XDD

*hugs* Go study and good luck!

[p01s0n3d]

I actually broke down yesterday and read this, but I didn't fail Japanese completely, so everything is good. This is pretty much the first time I've had to actually leave a review.

That is an awesome story! I absolutely love the setting, and the characters, and how you tie canon into perspective. I was seriously impressed with all of the backstory you poured into this. I always love reading your fictions because you are so creative with your plots (I'm envious of you), and this wasn't one to disappoint. This was definitely one of your most awe-inducing fics. Amazing. :D

[betelin_notecor]

*hugs* I'm glad you didn't fail!

And I always break down on stuff like this too. XD

The backstory was the most fun to write. The buyer gave me part of the plot had it set up as a completely AU world with no Sirius, Peter, or James (even though Harry existed), and no reason for Remus's lycanthropy. This struck me as odd, so I just HAD to write backstory. It was entertaining. XD I even used real history!